帮忙翻译成英语

Question

我是来自广东财经大学2013届政法新闻一班的戴菁
其实早在上大学之前。就有了出国留学的考虑。
高考失利让我更加坚定要体验不一样的人生
我并不觉得失利让人心疼。也并不遗憾。这全是不一样的人生体验
访学也是一样的
作为自己的成人礼。毕业的暑假去了一趟泰国
没有人陪。没有哄哄闹闹的旅行团。没有多余的想法
一个背包就踏上了旅途
旅途中遇到了形形色色的背包客
基本来自欧洲。二十岁出头。阳光坚毅勇敢
交谈过程中了解了好多他们的生活。都是我不曾听闻的
我想走远。想看这个世界
自幼独立且理性。在生活上的能力很强。
可是不够活泼开朗是我的一个弱点。或许是思想和同龄人有差别
我更喜欢一个人静静看书。看电影
旅途中的人。让我更愿意去接触活生生的世界
心中有种强烈的愿望。去。去体验这种不一样
不管这种体验能带给我什么。我知道收获的不仅仅会是口语
或者是履历表上比较好看的一笔。
那是人生。

我自己翻译了一遍。句式不够好看很生硬。是要申请哥伦比亚的交换生
有点难度。我想写的漂亮些再上交。还希望各位能帮忙写写。我修改完可能还得麻烦各位再看一遍呢
谢谢！辛苦了！

Answer 1

I'm from Guangdong University of Finance and economics news 2013 and Dai Jing from class 1
In fact, as early as in the University before. Have study abroad consideration.
The failure of college entrance examination made me more determined to experience different life
I don't think the defeat hurts. Don't regret. This is not the same life experience
Visiting the same
As their adult ceremony. Graduate summer trip to Thailand
No one to accompany. No fool fool tours. Have no idea
A backpack is embarked on a journey
The road met of every hue Backpackers
Basic from europe. Twenty years old. The sun strong brave
The process of conversation understanding a lot of their lives. I don't ever heard of
I want to go far. Want to see the world
His independent and rational. In the life of the very strong ability.
But not a cheerful and lively is a weakness of mine. Perhaps the thought and peers have different
I like a person quietly read a book. Watch movie
The journey of man. Let me be more willing to contact the living world
Have a strong desire. Go to the. Experience this different
Whether this experience can bring to me. I know the harvest will not only be spoken
Or is your resume is a nice pen.
It is life.

Answer 2

PS是吧，我是过来人。写得很好，可在个人陈述中像“高考失利让我……这样的话最好不要讲，因为这不是理由，每个人都会说自己失利。“可是不够活泼开朗是我的一个弱点……这样的话我们认为是谦虚，在他们眼中就不好说了。。。我认为一篇个人陈述就是逻辑思维性格和气质的体现，字里行间都要透露着自信。

下面我试着翻译一下，外面翻译都是要钱的，我只是个实习者，所以免费。能给分就行。
I am DaiJing, an undergraduate student who is from Guangdong University of Finance and Economics. Politics and Law is my course.
I was looking forward to obtain the opportunity of overseas studying before the beginning of the university career.
I made a decision that I hope to perform a different life while the time I met the failure of University Entrance Examination
I feel neither sorry nor regret about this examination. I am definitely understand that it is a great experience of my life.
Visiting study is also a very excellent way to obtain learning experience abroad.
I have gone to Thailand as my adulthood ceremony when I graduated from high school.
There is no one else gone with me. I traveled there all by myself.
Many kinds of backpackers I have met during the journey, most of them are young guys from EU, with the feelings of sunshine and braves.
Through the conversation with them, I got lots of their life styles that I have never heard before.
I am eager for going abroad, understanding the world.
I have a free spirit and handle daily life independently, although sometimes I am a bit of been a solitary.
I prefer to reading quietly, or watching a interesting movie.
As a traveller, touching the real life is what I most like to do.
There is a strong desire bursting out of my deeply heart. I aspire to have a different life.
I do not really know what could I get in the future, but I know English spoken or a good education is not the only thing I need.
I need a real life!

好多意思我不理解，所以只能翻译的这种程度。祝你申请成功！追问

非常的谢谢！！！我学到好多有用的表达！自己写的这篇有点惨不忍睹。。。哈哈。我去修改修改。祝实习顺利！

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