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My name is Humudi. I’m glad to introduce myself to you.
I study at Huicai School. 在学校我的成绩还不错，在第十名左右，各科成绩都还平均，语文比较突出。(这句应该怎么说呢？)
I have a lot of interesting. Before I was trained running and get No.4.
I like music very much. I can play the Guzheng. This summer vacation I prepare to learn piano.
I choose Japanese because I’m interested in language and influence by my brother, 我哥哥是这所学校02届的毕业生，现在国家园林局工作，听过他的一些介绍我对日语有了兴趣。也开始了解有关日本的一些事情。
At school I am very active, often to join activity by school or community.
This year I election the Olympic Games volunteer. I fail to be elected, but I don’t regret. I will meet more chances. I think I can catch up them in the future. (以后机会还很多，我也有更充分的时间准备，等待下一次机会来临。)

(我从报纸、宣传册上看到有各种国际交流活动的现场都有二外的学生做志愿者，这也是这所学校吸引我的地方。)这一段不太会翻。

I hope I can study at Beijing International Studies University. Thank you.

中文的部分要怎么翻呢？英文的有错的没有啊？
有错的麻烦改下~~谢谢~~

Answer 1

My name is Humudi. I’m glad to introduce myself to you.
I am now studying at Huicai School. My study is good which ranking tenth at my class. I got the average score at all subjects and my chinese study is excellent.

I have a lot of interests. I was trained in running and got the fourth prize at the competition. I like music very much. I can play the Guzheng. This summer vacation I'm preparing to learn piano.
I choose to study Japanese because I’m interested in studying language and influenced by my brother. My brother graduated from this school at 2002 and now he is working in National Gardening goverment.I became interested in Japanese after hearing his indroduction and began to learn something of Japanese.

At school I am very active, often join activities held by school or community.
This year I was applying for the Olympic Games volunteer. Althoug I failed to be elected, I didn’t feel any regret. Such kind of opportunities will be appeared more in the future, I will have enough time to prepare and wait for them.

I see many international exchange activities on newspapers and brochures that have volunteers who are students that are learing the second language. This is another reason that this school attracts me most.

I hope I can study at Beijing International Studies University. Thank you.本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 2