第1个回答 2020-09-21
你好，句意不通、语法错误连篇。打分的话也就是10分左右哈。
题目中已经说了分为三个段，你就按着三个段来。
第一段农场情况+第二段采摘情况+第三段感受：
I came to a fruit farm with my classmates last weekend.The farm is about 10 kilometers far from our school.There were so many kinds of fruit trees.
We were so happy to see this scene，and started to pick fruit.I like apples most，so I picked a lot of apples.About two hours later，we all got enough fruit .We palyed some games after lunch ，and got back to school.
It was so happy to spend that weekend with my classmates，and I am waiting for the next time.
题目中已经说了分为三个段，你就按着三个段来。
第一段农场情况+第二段采摘情况+第三段感受：
I came to a fruit farm with my classmates last weekend.The farm is about 10 kilometers far from our school.There were so many kinds of fruit trees.
We were so happy to see this scene，and started to pick fruit.I like apples most，so I picked a lot of apples.About two hours later，we all got enough fruit .We palyed some games after lunch ，and got back to school.
It was so happy to spend that weekend with my classmates，and I am waiting for the next time.