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英语作文 写给朋友李华的一封电子邮件，和他商量有关区某地旅游的事情。 着急...谢谢
Dear Li Hua
Good news!I have booked the tickets and the hotel, the hotel is on the third floor, I've been here before. It is very clean, service attitude is also very good. You are on the way to buy a map, because of too much in a hurry, I forgot about it. I want to go to the Summer Palace shopping, you must have been there. The scenery there is very beautiful, I took my camera, where we can be a photo. Next to Beihai Park, it is also very famous, with many ancient buildings.
Xxxx (name )
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英语作文,假如你是李华,你的美国朋友来信说要来你所在的城市旅游,,请你介绍下旅游景点和交通环境，
介绍江西瑞安的，你参考你的城市改改。Ruian is the People's Republic of China Jiangxi Province's provincial capital, Chinese one of 35 super cities, has the essence or quintessence of things tianbao, the human outstanding earth deities since the ancient times fine reputation.It has more than 2200 years history and the deep cultural inside story, is the People's Republic of China State Council names the historical city.Not only Nanchang is the ecological environment exquisite the Chiangnan region of rivers and lakes, Communist Party of China it the colors raise place.Has the honor to receive many times the People's Republic of China"the nation cultured and civilized city", "the national health cityadvanced city", "the Chinese outstanding traveling city", "thenational two supports model city" the title.
Nanchang is situated at middle and lower reaches Yangtze River, westPoyang Lake the Nanan, is only 11 the provincial capital city whichwith southeast the Yangtze River delta, the Zhujiang Delta and Fujianthe economic zone adjoin west, receives opens, north-south north andsouth. Beijing nine, Zhejiang and Jiangxi provinces, the Anhui Jianxithree bar iron routes connect to this, is Beijing nine on-line theonly provincial capital city; 105th, 320, 316 federal highways gothrough vertically Nanchang; The Changbei international airport mayreach national each big city; The water transportation enters YangtzeRiver after Ganjiang River to leave East China Sea. Looked from theeconomic significance that, Nanchang has become international andeastern part the coastal developed area industry gradient shift idealarea.
假定你是中学生李华，你的美国朋友Eric想在下个月来中国旅游，时间一个星期，请你写一封邮件给他，介绍一
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Dear Eric,
Glad to know that you are coming to China for a trip next month. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
As for where exactly you should go for the week’s trip , I recommend Chengde Summer Palace ,the largest surviving royal garden in China. It’s located in Chengde,Hebei Province .The emperors in Qing Dynasty used to spend their summers there hunting while escaping the heat in Beijing ,the capital. The buildings ,gardens ,lakes and temples ,which have the characteristics of the buildings found in South China and Tibet. It’s really a nice place to visit ,especially in summer.
Besides ,please tell me when you’ll arrive in China exactly .Would you like me to meet you at the airport or book tickets for you ?
Looking forward to your reply and your coming to China.
试题分析：这是一篇以邮件形式的作文，注意邮件的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
假如你是李华。你前几天和父母一起去北京旅游了。请你给你的美国朋友马克写一封电子邮件介绍一下这次旅游
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'd like to tell you **utmy trip to the beach with my family last weekend.
We set off at six in the morning, hoping toenjoy the sunrise. When we arrived, there were already many people there. Thebeautiful sunrise impressed us very much. After that, we joined those who werepicking up shells. The most exciting thing was swimming in the sea. We enjoyedthe w**es, which always carried us back to the beach. After h**ing somedelicious seafood, we bought sou venirs for our friends. Besides, we took manybeautiful pictures. It was five o'clock in the afternoon when we started toreturn by boat. It was a wonderful day and we had great fun.
How was your weekend? Please write to tell me.
Yours,
书面表达（共25分）。假设你是李华。你的朋友Tom打算来重庆游玩，来之前想让你先给他写封信介绍一下重庆
Dear Tom,
I’m delighted to hear that you are going to visit Chongqing.Chongqing, where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million. Besides, there are many world famous places of interest, such as the Dazu Rock Carvings, the Three Gorges, which attract millions of tourists from all over the world. Nowadays, Chongqing, which is developing with high speed, is the biggest international city in China in terms of area and population. People here are very kind, warm and friendly to every visitor from any corner of the world. I believe you will enjoy your visit in Chongqing.
I hope to meet you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，向你的朋友Tom写封信介绍一下重庆。要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述时可以以要点时为顺序，也可以适当加工要点，但运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。象范文里面的where the Yangtze River and Jialing River meet, is situated in the southwest of China. 和Covering an area of over 80,000 square kilometers, it has a population of more than thirty million.都不失为好句子。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。
英语作文：假定你是李华了,你的澳大利亚朋友打算十一月份来中国旅游,来信询问有关旅游景点的情.写一封信
I'm glad you come to China, first wish you good luck in the China trip! In China, most of them varied spots in quiet village, or coastal edge, because the city appear lively, to avoid noisy city, we still choose to enjoy pastoral scenery! In rural villages, new rural construction in the villages made installed entertainment facilities, such as cafe bars etc recreation areas. Provide peasant accommodation and family life equipment. In rural life in fresh air. The traffic is convenient.