怎么用英语翻译 登鹳雀楼

Question

用英语翻译：白日依山尽， 黄河入海流。欲穷千里目， 更上一层楼。

Answer 1

The heating sun is disappearing by the mountain,
while the Yellow River merges into the Sea.
If you want a view covering thousands -miles of distance,
please step upward to a higher floor.
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Answer 2

The view on GuanQue Tower
Down went the sun behind the majestic mountains,
as the Yellow River flowed into the vast ocean.
Go on one more story to overlook the land,
to be embraced by the grandeur it shall command