初一英语作文 请根据下面表格中提供的信息，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，介绍你的好朋友比尔，开头也给出

Question

Name Bill
Age : 12
Nationality : English
Likes : Vegetables,fruit,reading,books,volleyball,pingpong
Dislikes : Ice crame,computer games
Phone number : 256-8516

开头：Bill is my good friend.

Answer 1

Bill is my good friend。I mean, one of my best friend. Well, he is a trodintional British12-year-old boy, prefering vegetables,fruit,reading,books,volleyball and pingpong to ice crame and computer games.
His phone number is 256-8516.So, if you are interested,call this number and and talk to him!
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trodintional British这个词是什么意思？开头不计入总词数

追答

trodintional British12-year-old boy
传统的英国12岁男孩
因为英国分四个区就自作主张地改成不列颠（即英格兰、苏格兰、威尔士，英国四区中的三个），实在不行改成English也行。
对了，boy后面的标点是逗号不是句号。但愿你们初一教过这点，没的话，保留句号，prefering改为He prefers。
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if you are interested,call this number and and talk to him!
这一句可不可以改一改？

追答

要往哪个方向改？
Now I introduce him to you all, and I hope you can get along well with him. Here's his number: 256-8516.
好吧变长了。。。

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Answer 2

Bill is my good friend. He is 12 years old. He is from England. He speaks English. His favorite food is vegetables and fruit. He likes reading,playing volleyball and ping-pong ball.He doesn't like ice cream and he doesn't like playing the computer games. His phone number is 256-8516.