i was supprising

Question

I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago．Since I came to the new school，I had planned to write to you．Therefore，the busy life of the school spared me no time．After came to the school，I made up of my mind to study hard．To tell the truth，that was Miss White，my new English teacher，who changed my mind．She suggested that I give in my bad habits．Although he is very strict with us，all the students fond of her．
I have to stop here，I am looking forward to hear from you soon．

Answer 1

I was surprising to receive your letter a few days ago．Since I came to the new school，I had planned to write to you． Therefore ，the busy life of the school spared me no time．After came to the school，I made up of my mind to study hard．To tell the truth， that was Miss White，my new English teacher，who changed my mind．She suggested that I give in my bad habits．Although he is very strict with us，all the students∧fond of her．
I have to stop here，I am looking forward to hear from you soon．
详
1．surprising改为surprised；分词错误．句子surprise作系动词的表语，且表达主语I的感受，要用过去分词来构成；现在分词表达事物的特征．
2．had改为have；时态错误．句子since连接的时间状语，表示从过去到现在的时间，是现在完成时态的用法．
3．Therefore改为However；副词错误．句意表达的是转折，且句中有逗号分隔，要用表示转折关系的副词however来构成．
4．came改为coming或在came前加I；动名词错误．句中after为介词，后接名词或动名词；也可以在came前加I，构成after连接的时间状语从句．
5．of去掉；动词搭配错误．make up one's mind下决心，固定短语．
6．that改为it；代词错误．it was…who…构成强调句型，对主语Miss White进行强调．
7．in改为up；动词搭配错误．give up放弃；give in让步，屈服．
8．he改为she；逻辑指代错误．句意指代的是前面的Miss White，要用she来指代．
9．加are；短语搭配错误．be fond of喜欢，固定短语．
10．hear改为hearing；动名词错误．句中to是介词，后接名词或动名词．