第1个回答 2013-06-12
我觉得zoo太俗套了
可以改为Aquarium(海洋馆)
这样显得有单词量 而且结构与zoo差不多
很符合小学六年级思维
it is a happy summer holiday in my life,and now i can remember the days clearly.
it was one year ago,my parent took me to the aquarium,a lot of sea animals lived in there,such as dolphin,penguin and so on.
the most beautiful thing was that i made a friend there.his name is jim,we study in the same school,but i never saw him before.
so,it was really fantastic.
这适合水平处于五六年级到初一的,你要几年级的
第2个回答 2013-06-12
I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year. I liked green plants, clear rivers and lovely amimals there.I breathed the fresh air on the mountain and sometimes I went swimming in the river. I kept a diary every day.
I liked not only the scene of the countryside, but also the people there. I helped them to do farm work. I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. The children were interested in English. They were good at reading and writing, but did not do well in listening and speaking. I helped them improve their listening and speaking. Their parents thought highly of me. I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside.
今年我去农村过暑假。我喜欢那儿绿油油的植物,清澈的小河和可爱的动物。我在山上呼吸新鲜的空气,有时在河里游泳。我每天记日记。
我不仅喜欢那里的景色,而且喜欢那里的人。我帮他们干农活,帮助邻家的孩子复习功课。孩子们对英语很感兴趣,他们在读、写方面很好,但听、说不好。我帮助他们提高听、说能力,他们的父母高度赞扬了我。我意识到农村确实需要知识。
第3个回答 2013-06-12
Now that summer holiday is coming,I need to make a holiday plan.First,I plan to finish my homework in two weeks.Then I would like to spread my wings and go traveling abroad.It is really fun to meet foreign friends and learn foreign culture.At last,I think it necessary for me to go over my lessons in order not to forget what I have learnt.I think I will have a wonderful holiday!