第1个回答 2008-05-30
我来试试。。呵呵
縂有那样一个梦境，
There has always been the same dream,
你站在我的面前止不住地哭泣。
you stand in front of me crying incessantly.
我没有办法走近你，
I can't walk up close to you,
所以我也与你一同哭泣不止。
so I cry with you.
无论发生什麽事，
No matter what happens,
我都会一直在你身旁。
I will always be on your side.
虽然如今这显得如此苍白无力。
It is all so helpless today,
虽然现在我什麽都做不到。
since there is nothing I can do.
但我相信它能传达得到。
But I hope it can convey the message,
给我一个存活的藉口。
which gives me an execuse to live on.
我已经不能再为自己而活。
I can no longer only live for my own being.
请带我走。
Please take me with you.
第2个回答 2008-05-30
做了一点在自己理解基础上的修改。
縂有那样一个梦境，
There was a dream
你站在我的面前止不住地哭泣。
You stood in front of me and crying.
我没有办法走近你，
I can not touch you at all.
所以我也与你一同哭泣不止。
So what I could do was crying with you.
无论发生什麽事，
No matter what happened
我都会一直在你身旁。
I will always stand by your side.
虽然如今这显得如此苍白无力。
Although the promise seems so powerless.
虽然现在我什麽都做不到。
Although I can do nothing for you now.
但我相信它能传达得到。
I do believe you could feel my heart.
给我一个存活的藉口。
Give me an excuse to survive please.
我已经不能再为自己而活。
I can no longer live without you.
请带我走。
Please take me with you.
第3个回答 2008-05-30
我翻译的大概意思如下
The total as a dream,
I stand before you to cry Zhibu Zhu.
I can not approached you,
Therefore, I have not cried together with you.
No matter what happens,
I would have been in your side.
Although this is now so feeble.
Although I can not do anything.
However, I believe it can be conveyed.
Give me a viable excuse.
I can no longer live for themselves.
Please take me go.
第4个回答 2008-05-30
Always have a such dreamland
You was stand in front of me and sob your heart out
I cant approach to you
Therefore,i just can cry together with you
Regardless any matters was happen
I will still beside you
Although it seen to be pale and weak
Although now i cant do anything
But i believe that all can come true
Please give a reason that i can continue of my life
I aldready cant keep alive any more
Please take me fleeing from here本回答被提问者采纳
第5个回答 2008-05-30
我认为 帅哥志伟 翻译的还可以