第1个回答 2013-05-30
Sorry, I was wrong, I was stupid, do not know how to speak, not Zhong Yuqing Chen Qing two sisters could talk, I don't know what to say, what not to say, I think you said, I treat a friend is sincere, the disadvantage is that I do not know how to talk. A friend in difficult times, I can't leave, to help a friend, when friends through difficult, realize the dream, when the shareholders, I choose to leave, lest others misunderstand I help a friend is the future rewards. Blessed are the different entitlements, hardship, I will always help in friends, care.
对不起,我错了,我是愚蠢的,不知道怎么说,没有钟余庆陈青两姐妹会说话,我不知道该说什么,不说什么,我想你说的,我对一个朋友是真诚的,我的缺点是不知道怎么说话。在困难的时候,朋友,我不会离开,去帮助一个朋友,当朋友们度过困难,实现梦想,当股东,我选择离开,免得别人误会我帮一个朋友是未来的回报。有福的人是不同的权利,困难,我总会帮助朋友,关心。本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答 2013-05-30
你这是口语吧,有些地方我就省略了啊.就是说说出来自然,但是作为书面的话会缺东西.我的假设是你给外国人写.
Sorry, that's my fault, I'm stupid. I don't talk as smartly as Yuqing Zhong and Qing Chen do. I don't know what I should say or what I shouldn't. I just speak the truth.(这句话的翻译是,我说真话,用来取代"我想到就说",西方人没这个说话习惯,我给你意译了) I treat my friends with all my heart. But the only problem is that I can not talk smartly. (这里说...that I don't lie.跟前边呼应会更好一些,但是就直白了,也是西方人的风格) I won't leave my friends behind, if they are going through a hard time, (注意是逗号, 说的时候间断别太长,马上跟上高潮) I will help them all along until their dreams come true where they've become one of the stockholders.(不要用a stockholder, 典型中国英语) Then nobody would mistake me for benefiting from the help to my friends. Endure misfortune together, leave blessings alone for friends.
I will always be there for my friends.( 这句话是是外国人最常说的,可以完全表达你最后一句话的意思),
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有了分割线好像很专业
纯属兴趣, 针对问题,纯属手打
参考外教意见与书籍.
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第3个回答 2013-05-30
sorry, it's my fault,I am a dull girl and not good at communication.I am not as smart as Zhong yuqing Chen qing , I don't know what i can say and what i can not. I am so forthright that I treat everyone sincerely. my shortcoming is the lack of the skill of communication.
I will never abandon my friend if he is in trouble.when he overcome it and become the stockholder. I will leave him. In order to avoid other people misunderstanding me,they maybe think all i want is his reward some day.
Share hardship and reject the happiness. I will be with my friend forever!
你的文章太口语化了