英语作文 假如你是一名失学儿童,名叫李华,你有幸得到在广州工作的Mr.Brown的资助,可重返校园

给Mr.Brown[写信]内容:
1能重返学校,非常感激
2在老师的帮助下,学习有很大的进步,受到老师表扬和鼓励
3要更加努力学习,取得更大的进步
4盼望见到Mr.Brown,希望他寄来一张照片
(不用写得太好)

Respectable Mr,BrownHello.I am the student whose name is Li Hua that you have helped in finance to come back to school.I am quite appreciate your assistance.Nowadays,thanks to my teachers' teaching,I got a great progress in studying and celebrated by my teachers.I determined to pay more and more attention on studying and get higer grades.At last,I want to say,I am anxious to see you.So,Could you send me a photo?Thanks! Li Hua the 31th of October 2010
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第1个回答  2013-07-30
 Respected, Mr. Brown.Hello.My name is li hua, is a poor dropouts, in your help, I return to the campus. Nowadays, with the teacher's help, I study made a great progress, I determined to pay more and more attention to study and get higher education achievement. On this very thank you give me everything, I will cherish this hard-won opportunity, will never betray you for my expectations!Finally, I would like to say is, I eager to see you, but because there is no chance to guangdong, can you send me a photo? Thank you! On October 31, 2010, li hua
第2个回答  2013-07-30
I appreciate your support that I can return to school.I have made progress on study with the teacher's help.The teachers encourage and praise me.I will study harder to make greater progres.I hope you can send me your photo and look forward to seeing you.