求英语高手帮忙把下面这段中文翻译成英文。因为要给一位英国的亲戚发短信,所以翻译的一定要庄重得体。

内容如下:您好,我的名字叫**,我是**的孙子,**的儿子。几天前我父亲给与您通过电话。如果有这个可能的话,我想出国深造,但对于一些具体的情况不太了解,所以想请教您一些相关的问题。如果您现在方便,请回复短信,我将打电话给您。

(跪求英语高手帮忙翻译,本人对自己的英语实在没有自信,请务必翻译准确,这条短信对我真的非常非常非常重要)

PS:我不太会和人打交道,所以不太会说话,也请帮我看看上面的中文说的是否得体。总感觉有点不自在。

分不是问题,要是能帮我这个忙给多少分都行。

发短信啊?那就不要太罗嗦。

Dear Mr. XXX(你亲戚的名字), I'm XXX,the grandson of XXX and the son of XX (建议你说你亲戚认识的一个人就可以了。爷爷的孙子,或者爸爸的儿子,不要重复), My father called you yesterday(如果是上周一就说last Mon.). I've some questions about study overseas(如果在美国的话,就直接说in the USA,如果是泛指海外学习的话,就用overseas)May I call you for some advise, when you are convenient? Thank you!

完整的:
Dear Mr. XXX! I'm XXX, the son of XXX. My father called you last Mon. I've some questions about study in the USA. May I call you for some advise, when you are convenient? Thank you!

最后的thank you 可加可不加,最好等对方回复以后再谢谢追问

你这个回答太好了,我也觉得短信越精简越好。再请问一个问题,这个亲戚是我爸爸的表哥,我应该称呼他什么呢?他的名字我还不知道。还有我名字叫张三,是不是英文就写成San Zhang ?

追答

用uncle就可以了,老外不分堂亲,表亲。姓知道吗?不知道也没关系。你的名字如果是张三的话,可以直接写,I'm San, the son of XXX就可以了。没必要写姓。如果你坚持要写姓的话,就是你说的那种写法。

但是你父亲的名字要写全称

追问

再问您最后最后一个问题,我还和他不熟悉,Dear uncle是不是太肉麻了,还是老外不看这个,这就是一种格式。加上好还是不加好!如果说出国留学用go abroad for further education是不是比study overseas正式?

追答

用Dear uncle,尊称。

study overseas 就可以了,I plan to further my study overseas.

你说的那个是中国式的表达

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第1个回答  2013-03-10
Hello xx
This is xx,whose son of xx grandson of xx.
My father talked you several days ago.I hope I can study in a great collage in UK/US 看他是哪个国家,UK是英国,US美国,AU澳洲. I want to know some details about this.please replay me when you are free and I will call you.thank you
Regards
Xx
第2个回答  2013-03-10
Hello, Mr.****(你要找的人的姓氏). Sorry to disturb you. I'm ***, son of ****. My father had contacted you several days ago. If I get a chance, I do want to study aboard. Since I'm not familiar with some details about studying aboard, could I seek advice from you? Please let me know when you are available, and I will give you a call.
个人觉得没有加 “我是**的孙子”这句话的必要,毕竟联系他的是你的父亲。 另外如果对方是教授的话,开头换成Dr.***。 希望对你有帮助。追问

虽然已经采纳了答案,但是还是谢谢你耐心的回答。O(∩_∩)O~谢谢!

第3个回答  2013-03-10
Hello,Mr.xx. What's going on with you? I'm xx's grandson, xx's son. My father called you several days ago. I send this message to ask for your help. If it's possible, I hope to study abroad. However, I don't know much about your country.So, can you help me with my problems? If it's convenient for you now, please reply me and I will call you.^_^
希望可以帮到楼主。
第4个回答  2013-03-10
hi,I am** ,**grandson,and**son.My father called you a few days ago.If it is possible I want to go abroad for further education,but I do not konw what I should do.Could I ask you something
about it? If you have free time please reply me by SMS. I will call you when you reply me.
纯手打..望采纳..没有语病..
第5个回答  2013-03-10
经过我的鉴定,他回答得很好。你给分吧。追问

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