请帮我把这段话翻译成英文,谢谢!

千万不要用有道。。翻译地顺口些,谢了!!
尊敬的校长:
您好!我是高一五班的一名学生。很高兴能与你用书信的方式交流。因为您每天公务繁忙,所以我能见到您的次数不多。我将要对您提两个建议:
1.学生的上学时间应该宽松一些。因为我认为学生难免会迟到,时间宽松就不会使学生感到紧张。
2.放学的时间应该提早一些。尤其是冬天,放学时天已经黑了,而且正是车多人多的时候,路上实在不安全。
最后,我希望您身体健康,学校越来越好!

Dear headmaster,
I am a student of High class one five.I am very happy to talk something with you in writting.Because you are busy in public affairs,it is a valuable opportunity to meet you .now I want to offer my two suggestions.
Firstly,the study time should be relaxed.Because I think the students will be late unavoidably,the relaxed time will not make students feel nervous.Secondly the after school time should be earlier.Especially in the winter, it was already dark after school .Besides the car and walker will be more and more .In fact It is not safe on the road .
Finally, I wish you have a good health and school will be better and better!yours,
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第1个回答  2013-01-28
Don't use youdao.. Translation to read smoothly some, thanks!!!!! Respect of the principal: hello! I'm a five class of a student. Very glad to be with you to communicate with letters. Because you busy every day, so I can see you much. I'm going to ask for you two Suggestions:
1. The students go to school time should be loose some. Because I think that students will inevitably be late, time loose won't make students feel nervous.
2. The school time should be some early. Especially in winter, when school was over and it had already become dark, and it is more than the car, the road is not safe. Finally, I wish you good health, the school is getting better and better!来自:求助得到的回答
第1个回答  2013-01-28
Dear principal,
I'm a grade ten student in class five.And i'm

glad to communicate with you through letters.You

are so busy that we seldom meet.I'd like to make

two suggestions here:
First,the time for class should been put off a

little,which is able to make students not feel that

stressed,because we cant avoied beeing late.
Second,the time for leaving school should been

advanced especially in winter.Its almost dark and

the streets are crowded with people and vehicles after school.So

its really not safe.
Thank you.
Best wishes.
yours,
第2个回答  2013-01-28
Dear headmaster: hello! I am a student of class one five. Very pleased to work with you by letter communication. Because you are every day busy, so I can see you didn't amount to much. I will mention two suggestions for you: 1 of the students go to school time should be relaxed some. Because I think the students will inevitably be late, time will not make students feel nervous loose. 2 school time should be earlier. Especially in the winter, it was already dark when school was over, and it is more than the car, on the road is not safe. Finally, I wish you good health, school will be better and better!是正确的,望采纳!!!!!!!!