首先 我说一下 日记是写给自己看的 但是也不能随便乱写 因为 那样什么都不会提高你第一应该注意的是 时态 大部分的地方 我建议你用过去时 因为日记的玩意大部分是过去发生的嘛 当然也有描绘你现在写这个日记的心情 还有将来的什么打算啊之类的 那个就用现在 或者将来时了对于时态 我的态度是一句话 事情发生在过去就过去 将来就将来 现在就现在 进行着的就进行着的 该完成就完成 关于句型 我觉得你在写日记又不是写academic writing 没有必要拘泥于什么句型但是 你说你是初中水平 我觉得写日记可能不知道是个什么方向 句型不用拘泥 但是大概的写作方向 心中高还是要有个数 请见 我摘自一个日记网站的文章 个人认为 可以成为一篇范文(其中有些时态的错误 不过 那个不要紧了 日记就像是自己对自己说话 不用太拘泥语法 句型什么的) 我觉得 这篇写的好的就是因为他语言足够流畅 我读了一遍下来 感觉非常舒服 没有咯噔 这篇文章是叙事型的 你也可以写描写心理的 但是总之就是语言要流畅 这点你搞定了之后 再继续你的词汇的运用句型的修改什么的 语法 只要基本正确就好 不用深究 我认为你一开始写的时候就开始深究语法 会打击你的写作积极性的 所以就基本的时态语态正确就好(什么将来完成时啊 虚拟语气啊什么的 你大可以在一开始的时候不理会) 此篇diary来自:
http://www.my-diary.org/read/?entry=542805117 这个网站的网址是:
http://www.my-diary.org/surf/ 2011-01-28 23:28:19 (UTC)
out smarted by a doggie doctorso, i was going to tell you about my little visit to the vet
yesterday. my dog has another ear infection. she gets them all of the
time. so frustrating and so expensive.so i thought that i would be smart and i devised this plan to get my dog
to the vet and get her ear taken care of for as cheap as possible.i spent a good hour on the phone and internet until i found a coupon for
a free first visit at the animal hospital. score!! so i print the
coupon and make the appt.so yesterday, i show up at my appointment with my little doggie. i'm way
stoked because i figure i only have to pay for the ear medication which
is about twenty-five dollars. the visit is free thanks to my handy-dandy
coupon...whoop, whoop, i'm so smart!!the doctor looks at my dogs ears. yep, they are infected. ok, i knew
that...that's why i'm here. the doctor takes a q-tip and swabs the dogs
ears and says that she wants to make sure that it's the kind of
infection that she suspects. i'm thinking "whatever" just get me out of
here with my dog medicine. the doctor leaves the room and comes back with some medicine. she tells
me that the medicine is twenty-one dollars. i'm on cloud nine. i got
over! i beat the system and only have to pay the low, low price of
twenty-one bucks! i thank the doctor and go to the receptionist area to check out.low and behold...
the bill was seventy-nine dollars! it seem that she charged me an extra
fifty-eight dollars for something. "wait, this isn't right," i tell the
receptionist, "i had a coupon for a free visit."you know what she tells me? she tells me that the bill is correct and
that i was charged fifty-eight dollars because the doctor put the gook
from the swab of my doggie's ear on a slide and looked at it for 2
seconds under a microscope.good lord, i just about died! there was nothing that i could do but pay
the bill.outsmarted by the doggie doctor!
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