帮我翻译一段英语

“同学们好,很高兴站在这个讲台上,因为这是我第一次用英语面对全班同学说话.
我的英语很差(或不是很好),但是今天我试着要用英语跟大家说几句话:
陈夏琪,你的英语很棒;
余燕丽,你的写作很棒,我很羡慕(Envy);
郭嘉欣,你很漂亮,也很幸福(Happiness);
徐惠珊,你也很漂亮;
陈长皓,你很英俊(Handsome);
袁士凯,你的足球很棒;
罗振坤,你很强壮(Strong);
王德立,好朋友;
朱华忠,你很黑(black);
陈佩斯,你的同桌(deskmate)很可爱(lovely);
肖宇坛,好兄弟(Brother);
黄炫霖,你很正直(honest);
周裔彬,有时间一起回去我们的家乡(hometown)——陆丰;
老师,我的好老师!
今天我很开心,因为我第一次用英语跟大家聊天.
我说得还可以吗?
谢谢!你们的掌声在哪里?”

麻烦英语高手们了,不要用金山词霸什么的哦!
能不能口语化一点?

Hello everyone!I am glad to stand here because this is the first time for me to talk with you. Though my English is very poor, I will try my best to speak some English .
陈夏琪,Your English is very good!
余燕丽,You are a good weiter,
郭嘉欣,You are a beautiful and happy girl
徐惠珊,You are beautiful too
陈长皓,You are handsome
袁士凯,You are a good football player
罗振坤,You are strong
王德立,We are good friends
朱华忠,You are a little black
陈佩斯,Your deskmate is very lovely
肖宇坛,Good boy
黄炫霖,You are honest
周裔彬,Let's go my hometown---lufeng together when we are free
My good teacher!
I am very happy because this is the first time for me to check with you in English
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第1个回答  2008-11-29
Hello class,i am glad to stand on the podium,cause this is my first time speak in english to the whole class. my english is not so good,but i 'll try to speak several sentence in english :
Chen Xiaqi ,your english is great;
Yu Yanli, your writing is amazing,i really envy you;
Guo Jiaxin ,you're beautiful and happiness;
Xu Huishan,you're beautiful,too;
Chen Changhao,you're really handsome;
Yuan Shikai,your football skill is good;
Luo Chenkun,you're strong;
Wang Deli,good friend;
Zhu Huazhong,you're black;
Chen Peisi, your deskmate is very lovely;
Xiao Yutan, good brother;
Huang Xuanlin,you're honest;
Zhou Yibing, let's go to your hometown if we have time;
Lu Feng, my good teacher!
i'm very happy today,because this is my first time talking to you in english, how is my speaking?
thank you!where is the applause?

Hello everyone!I am glad to stand here because this is the first time for me to talk with you. Though my English is very poor, I will try my best to speak some English .
陈夏琪,Your English is very good!
余燕丽,You are a good weiter,
郭嘉欣,You are a beautiful and happy girl
徐惠珊,You are beautiful too
陈长皓,You are handsome
袁士凯,You are a good football player
罗振坤,You are strong
王德立,We are good friends
朱华忠,You are a little black
陈佩斯,Your deskmate is very lovely
肖宇坛,Good boy
黄炫霖,You are honest
周裔彬,Let's go my hometown---lufeng together when we are free
My good teacher!
I am very happy because this is the first time for me to check with you in English

My fellow classmates,it is a great honor and pleasure for me to speak here,because this is my first time to speak to you in English.Although I'm not really good at oral English,but I will try to do my best to communicate with you in English.

陈夏琪,你的英语很棒;
You speak English very well.
余燕丽,你的写作很棒,我很羡慕(Envy);
I really admire your excellent writing skills.
郭嘉欣,你很漂亮,也很幸福(Happiness);
You are an angel with extraordinary beautiful and bliss.
徐惠珊,你也很漂亮;
You are also a pretty girl.
陈长皓,你很英俊(Handsome);
You are really handsome.
袁士凯,你的足球很棒;
You are a superstar on the football field.
罗振坤,你很强壮(Strong);
You are a big guy.
王德立,好朋友;
My best friend.
朱华忠,你很黑(black);
You are kind of dark skinned.
陈佩斯,你的同桌(deskmate)很可爱(lovely);
You have a lovely deskmate.
肖宇坛,好兄弟(Brother);
You are my buddy.
黄炫霖,你很正直(honest);
You are the most honest person I have ever known.
周裔彬,有时间一起回去我们的家乡(hometown)——陆丰;
I would like to return to our hometown lufeng with you whenever we have time.
老师,我的好老师!
My dear teacher!
今天我很开心,因为我第一次用英语跟大家聊天.
我说得还可以吗?
谢谢!你们的掌声在哪里?”
Thank you!Give me some encouragements and inspirations,please!

hello, everyone. i'm glad to stand here. it's my first time to speak english in front of you. My Enlish is poor, but i'll try today.
Chen Xiaqi, your english is great.
余燕丽, your English writing is very cool, I envy you .
郭嘉欣,you're so beatiful and also quite happy.
徐惠珊, you're also very pretty
陈长皓,you're very handsome
袁士凯,your football is terrific.
罗振坤,you're very Strong);
王德立,my good friend
朱华忠,you look very black
陈佩斯,your deskmate is very cute/ lovely ;
肖宇坛,Buddy Purple (不用brother)
黄炫霖,you're very honest);
周裔彬,let's go back to our hometown (LU FENG) together if we both have time;
(英文里不叫"teacher"..你就叫"Mr./ Miss..") my dear teacher.
today i'm very happy, because it's my first time to talk with you in English.
did I say well?
thanks. Please give me some clapps.

hi, everybody, I'm so glad to stand on this platform. because it's my first time to speak English to my whole class mates. My English is not very well, but I still try to speak a few sentences in English:
陈夏琪,your English is grate.
余燕丽,your writing is excellent, I envy you so much.
郭嘉欣,you are pretty and happiness.
徐惠珊,you are pretty too.
陈长皓,you are handsome.
袁士凯,you are good at playing soccer.
罗振坤,you are very strong.
王德立,you are my good friend.
朱华忠,you looks black.
陈佩斯,your deskmate is lovely.
肖宇坛,my good brother.
黄炫霖,you are honest.
周裔彬,Let's go to my hometown----lufeng when we get time.
Teacher, my good teacher!
Today I am so happy because it's my first time to communicate with you guys.
Did I make a good work/job?
Thankyou! Where are your applause?

把分给我吧,按CTRL+C是很辛苦的
第2个回答  2008-12-03
“同学们好,很高兴站在这个讲台上,因为这是我第一次用英语面对全班同学说话.
Hello everyone. I'm honored to be here as it's my first time speaking English in front of the whole class.
我的英语很差(或不是很好),但是今天我试着要用英语跟大家说几句话:
My English is not perfect, but I'll try my best. (英语语言习惯中没有必要把自己放太低)
陈夏琪,你的英语很棒;
Your English is great.
余燕丽,你的写作很棒,我很羡慕(Envy);
I envy you for your awesome writing skills. (awesome字典里会是不好的意思,但已成为了口语里“超赞”的表达方式)
郭嘉欣,你很漂亮,也很幸福(Happiness);
You are very pretty, and you have happiness (have discovered your happiness).
徐惠珊,你也很漂亮;
You are very pretty too.
陈长皓,你很英俊(Handsome);
You are handsome.
袁士凯,你的足球很棒;
You play great soccer.
罗振坤,你很强壮(Strong);
You are strong.
王德立,好朋友;
Good buddy.
朱华忠,你很黑(black);
You look black.
陈佩斯,你的同桌(deskmate)很可爱(lovely);
Your desk-mate is so lovely.
肖宇坛,好兄弟(Brother);
My brother!
黄炫霖,你很正直(honest);
You're an honest man.
周裔彬,有时间一起回去我们的家乡(hometown)——陆丰;
Let's go back to our hometown LuFeng together sometime.
老师,我的好老师!
Mr/Ms (Teacher's name), you are an awesome teacher!
今天我很开心,因为我第一次用英语跟大家聊天.
I'm really happy I talked to you in English for the first time. It made my day.
我说得还可以吗?
Did I do OK?
谢谢!你们的掌声在哪里?”
Thank you! How about some claps?
第3个回答  2008-11-28
My fellow classmates,it is a great honor and pleasure for me to speak here,because this is my first time to speak to you in English.Although I'm not really good at oral English,but I will try to do my best to communicate with you in English.

陈夏琪,你的英语很棒;
You speak English very well.
余燕丽,你的写作很棒,我很羡慕(Envy);
I really admire your excellent writing skills.
郭嘉欣,你很漂亮,也很幸福(Happiness);
You are an angel with extraordinary beautiful and bliss.
徐惠珊,你也很漂亮;
You are also a pretty girl.
陈长皓,你很英俊(Handsome);
You are really handsome.
袁士凯,你的足球很棒;
You are a superstar on the football field.
罗振坤,你很强壮(Strong);
You are a big guy.
王德立,好朋友;
My best friend.
朱华忠,你很黑(black);
You are kind of dark skinned.
陈佩斯,你的同桌(deskmate)很可爱(lovely);
You have a lovely deskmate.
肖宇坛,好兄弟(Brother);
You are my buddy.
黄炫霖,你很正直(honest);
You are the most honest person I have ever known.
周裔彬,有时间一起回去我们的家乡(hometown)——陆丰;
I would like to return to our hometown lufeng with you whenever we have time.
老师,我的好老师!
My dear teacher!
今天我很开心,因为我第一次用英语跟大家聊天.
我说得还可以吗?
谢谢!你们的掌声在哪里?”
Thank you!Give me some encouragements and inspirations,please!
第4个回答  2008-11-29
根据你的要求,写得十分口语化,遣词造句也很简单,关键是说的时候要流利和自信,有些地方适当作了修改和批注,祝你第一次英文演讲成功。
BTW 别忘了给分哦 

“同学们好,很高兴站在这个讲台上,因为这是我第一次用英语面对全班同学说话.
Hello everybody. I’m glad to stand here, because this is the first time I talk to all class in English.
我的英语很差(或不是很好),但是今天我试着要用英语跟大家说几句话:
You know I’m not good at English, but today I’ll try my best to say something:
陈夏琪,你的英语很棒;
Xx your English are great
余燕丽,你的写作很棒,我很羡慕(Envy);
Xx you are good at writing I admire you really envy 是贬义的别说
郭嘉欣,你很漂亮,也很幸福(Happiness);
Xx you are pretty and live a happy life
徐惠珊,你也很漂亮;
Xx you are beautiful
陈长皓,你很英俊(Handsome);
Xx handsome boy
袁士凯,你的足球很棒;
Xx wonderful football player
罗振坤,你很强壮(Strong);
Xx tough guy 意为硬汉
王德立,好朋友;
Xx my dear friend
朱华忠,你很黑(black);
Xx your skin are really dark 你的皮肤很黑 注 黑人才用black
陈佩斯,你的同桌(desk mate)很可爱(lovely);
Xx you have a very cute (可爱的,美剧里的常用口语)desk mate
肖宇坛,好兄弟(Brother);
Xx one word brother
黄炫霖,你很正直(honest);
Xx you are integrity
周裔彬,有时间一起回去我们的家乡(hometown)——陆丰;
Xx I like to go back to our hometown lufeng with you sometime
老师,我的好老师!
Xx our best teacher we ever met
今天我很开心,因为我第一次用英语跟大家聊天.
I’m really happy today after this first time English speech
我说得还可以吗?
Am I well enough?
谢谢!你们的掌声在哪里?”
Thank you very much where’s your applause?
Thank you