看看我小学语文上的这几句我翻译得英文怎么样？

Question

大家穿戴不同、语言不同，来到学校，都成了好朋友。
the wearing of everybody is different, the language is different, but come to school, all to be good friends.
那鲜艳的民族服装，把学校打扮得更加绚丽多彩。
that colorful people clothes, make the school has many colors.当，当当！当，当当！大青树上的钟声敲响了。
dang, dangdang! dang, dangdang!the bell rings in the big green tree.
这时候，窗外十分安静，树枝不摇了，鸟儿不叫了，蝴蝶停在花朵上，好像都在听同学们读课文。
this time, it's so peaceful out of the window. the branch doesn't swing, birds don't crow, and the butterfly falls in the flower, like all listen to schoolmates read text.
最有趣的是，跑来了几只猴子。
the most interesting, run and come several monkeys.
古老的铜钟，挂在大青树粗壮的枝干上。
the old copper bell hangs in the thick and strong branch of the big green tree.
凤尾竹的影子，在洁白的粉墙上摇晃。
the shadow of the phoenix tail bamboo swings on the white wall.

Answer 1

我做了一点点改动，欢迎更多大神来上不同的翻译版本。😀但愿对你有帮助。

大家穿戴不同、语言不同，来到学校，都成了好朋友。
The school create friendship even people have different languages or clothes.
那鲜艳的民族服装，把学校打扮得更加绚丽多彩。
The school looks colour with people dressing their national custumes.
当，当当！当，当当！大青树上的钟声敲响了。
dang, dangdang! dang, dangdang!the bell rings on the big green tree.
这时候，窗外十分安静，树枝不摇了，鸟儿不叫了，蝴蝶停在花朵上，好像都在听同学们读课文。
At this moment, everything stoped to listen the reading. Twig stop waving, birds stop singing and the butterfly stay on the flower.
最有趣的是，跑来了几只猴子。
The most interesting, several monkey comes along.
古老的铜钟，挂在大青树粗壮的枝干上。
the old copper bell hangs in the thick and strong branch of the big green tree.
凤尾竹的影子，在洁白的粉墙上摇晃。
The shadow of the fern leaf bamboo swings on the white wall.

Answer 2

不错(*๓´╰╯`๓)♡