求英语学霸修改这篇作文，希望有些句子可以换成高级句或者词组换得高级一点，希望可以找出多处错误～希望

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求英语学霸修改这篇作文，希望有些句子可以换成高级句或者词组换得高级一点，希望可以找出多处错误～希望可以给我打个分数，满分25分
   Nowadays,a number of public bicycle spots have been built in Zhuhai city.There are many new bicycles which are offering for people to use in each spots.If you want to use the public bicycle,you need to (get/handle) an IC card in China Construction Bank.It can be free for people to use the bicycle in one and a half hours.

     More and more people are using bicycles instead of cars,because they think riding bicycle which not only saves energy but also helps us keep fit.

    As far as i'm concerned,riding bicycle is a good way.For one thing,riding bicycle don't need any petrol so they are energy-saving.For another,riding bicycle is environmentally friendly and they won't give off any waste gas to pollute the air.What's more,riding bicycle is beneficial to our health

Answer 1

My Friend
Do you have any good friends? May is one of mine. She is ten years old. She is tall, and she has a round face, big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth, her hair is long and black. May and I are classmates, she sits behind me. We go home together every day when school is over. She does well in math while I'm good at Chinese. I often help her with her Chinese and she helps me with my math. We help each other and love each other, we're good friends.
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我的朋友
你有好朋友吗？May 是我的好朋友之一。她十岁了。她个子高高的，长着一张圆脸，大眼睛，小鼻子小嘴的，她的头发又黑又长。我和 May 是同班同学，她就坐在我后面。每天放学后我们一起回家。她擅长学数学而我则擅长学语文。我经常帮她学语文而她则帮我学数学。我们彼此关爱、互相帮助，我们是好朋友。追问

What the hell are you talking about

don't fool me,ok,just get out of my way

Answer 2

Today is Saturday. In the afternoon. some boys and i were playing football in the street . suddenly one of the boys fell down and hurt himself. so the other children took the boy to the hospital by bike. The doctor checked the boy at once in the hospital .and he said that it didn't matter much. Then the doctor told us not to play football in the street, It was dangerous. I think we shouldn't do that again.
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what the hell are u talking about