关于My Home 的英语作文，50个单词，六年级的

Question

如题所述

Answer 1

I
have
a
big
family.There
are
five
people
in
my
family.They
are
my
parents{父母},grangparents{祖父母或外祖父母}and
me.My
mother
is
a(n)
（
）.
(里面填你妈妈的职业，如果比较复杂，填an
office
worker就行了，是办公室职员的意思){a(n)的意思是可以使a，也可以是an，取决于后面名词的开头}My
father
is
a
(
同上).My
grandparents
look
after{照顾}me
at
home.We
are
very
happy.
可爱红色的错误：There
are
my
mother、father
and
me.{不能用there
are，应用they
are他们是}
She
is
tender.{tender用得不太好，用kind
和蔼的
比较好}
She
usually
is
hard,
but
she
find
the
time
to
me
every
day.{She
usually
is
hard中usually
应放在is的后面，但用always
总是
更适合。后半句我没有读懂。}
{He
is
bustle
about,but
he
guidance
my
homework.这个不是六年级的语法了，换成“He
is
busy.他很忙。”}
{Is
my
family,we
are
happiness.没有主语。“This
is
my
family.”happiness是名词，所以要用happy}

Answer 2

My
home
I
have
a
happiness
family.
There
are
my
mother、father
and
me.
My
mother
is
a
teacher.
She
is
kind.
She
is
usually
hard,
but
she
find
the
time
to
me
every
day.
My
father
is
a
doctor.
He
is
bustle
about,but
he
guidance
my
homework.
It
is
my
family,we
are
happy.
I
like
my
home.
由于我也是六年级的，所以可能有些地方不是很正确，不过希望能对你有帮助，可以参考一下。

Answer 3

i
love
my
home.
i
live
in
a
samll/big
town.
my
home
is
clean
and
beautiful
because
my
mother
likes
doing
homework.
my
home
is
crowed
because
there
are
(你家有几口人，用英文写几)family
members.
they
are
mother,
father,
sister
and
i.
we
love
each
other.
my
home
is
full
of
love.
六年级的作文还真是难写啊