需要英语高手~~救我。帮我写一段

Question

我要出国留学，听说要用英语自我介绍。帮帮我吧。谢谢
信息：我来自中国长春，是艺术生，女生。高中刚毕业。帮我编一段吧，附带翻译。。要不我怕我看不懂。。。。说2.3分钟的。。。
谢谢了。。。还有，怎样发音准确。。怎样没有中国式英语的味道？平时高中学的和标准打印差别在哪？
用词高级一点点。。。口语一点。。。

Answer 1

大段自我介绍
--第一印象是最重要的！
(1) Hello/Good morning /Good evening, ladies and gentlemen.
先生们，女士们，你们好／早上好／晚上好。
I am Stone Lee. I come from Beijing,
我是李斯通。我来自北京，
and I am currently a student at Beijing University.
现在是北京大学的学生 。
My favorite pastimes are reading, listening to music,
我最喜欢的消遣是阅读 、听音乐、
and spending time with my friends.
和朋友呆在一块。
I am majoring in international business
我主修国际商务和心理学，
and psychology because psychology is useful in every field.
因为心理学在每个行业里都很有用。
I hope to use my unique education to
我希望将来用我独特的
start my own company in the future.
知识来开办我自己的公司。
I will probably open a global consulting firm.
我可能会开一间国际咨询公司。
(2) I am really glad I could be with you today.
我今天非常高兴和你们在一起。
I hope everyone has a wonderful time. Thank you.
我希望大家都玩得愉快。谢谢。

Answer 2

Hello everyone! My name is ~~~~,I'm from changchun China.I'm a very lovely girl ,I love alll kinds of things.such as,sing ,dance .I want tell you I am a art student ,so I am good at many things.I forget to tell you I just graduate from the senior high school.追问

谢谢啊。。。不过。。。这个水平有点低唉。像初中生。。。。
这么简单我就不用百度知道了。。不过谢谢你

追答

没事

Answer 3

morning，everybody. I am a girl from Changchun, which is a gorgeous city in China. I am an art student and I recently graduate from a secondary school. My hobbies are singing, dancing and panting. I wish to make friends with everyone.

Answer 4

I am from China Changchun, is an art student.
I am a girl. I love english.
Just graduated from high school.
Nice to meet you, and be my friend.