如何写这封英文信

Question

大纲：写给AUNTY和UNCLE的
1.我已经受到了并非常喜欢你们给的钱、玩具熊和EMEI给的贝壳。（给予感谢）
2.我将上高中并会努力学习来感谢你们的恩情
3.如果SOPHIA愿意并且她有时间给我写信的话，我想让她当我的笔友
4.我感到非常荣幸能认识你们。你们将是我永远的朋友
5.欢迎你们到我的故乡威海来旅游

希望不要有语法等错误，谢谢！！！

Answer 1

Dear Aunt and Uncle,
I am very happy to recieve the money and teddy bear you gave me.Also, give my thanks to Emei for the seashells she gave me. I am going to study in Senior high soon and I will use my efforts to thank you for your kindness.
If Sophia wants and has time to write letters to me, I would be very honoured to become her pen-pal.
I am very honoured to know your family. You will be my friends forever.
You will be welcome to come to my hometown,Weihai, at any time!
Lots of love,
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Answer 2

Dear Uncle,
How time flies ! The teddy bear and Emels' conch were received to me , money too , thank you very much for you help !

I will go to the senior high school and try my best to study . I am very appreciate !
If Sophia have time , I hope she can write some letter for me , I hope we can become pen pal if we have opportunity .

Meet you are very luck in my life , you are my friends forever !

At last , welcome to travel for my hometown WeiHai !

Best wishes for you !

Yours !

Answer 3

I have already oftenned not received to like the shell that money,teddy bear and EMEI that you give give.(Give with gratitude)
I will ascend the senior high school will work hard to study also to appreciate your kindness
If SOPHIA would like to and she sometimes write a letter for me, I want to let the pen pal that she is me
My feeling be honored very much can know you.You will be my lasting friend
Welcome you to my home town 威 sea to travel