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Recently, more and more students have their own mobile phones. Some students think they can keep in convenient. They can listen to music and take photos. But the other students think mobile phones can get in the way of schoolwork. Some students like playing games and surfing the internet by mobile phones. Even some students cheat in test. It is bad for himself. I think the mobile phone is useful for someone, but students need not have it. I think the mobile phone makes some students can’t pay attention to study. It’s bad for every students.

Even some students cheat in test. It is bad for himself
不是应该是Even some students cheat in test. It is bad for themseves.吗
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第1个回答  2011-11-19
问题...but students don't need to have it.

it's bad for every student.追问

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我觉得其实不一定用themselves,但是这个比himself更好是真的。

第2个回答  2011-11-19
They can listen to music,take photos snd so on.