我自己写的一篇自我介绍求修改并翻译成英文~~

下面是我的自我介绍:
我叫XX,今年15岁,来自XX~~我最喜欢的科目是体育~~因为我喜欢打篮球和踢足球~~我天天都打篮球,如果有时间你可以和我一起打~·我最喜欢的颜色是绿色,因为我喜欢大自然给我的感觉~我喜欢吃土豆和炸鸡~但我不喜欢吃番茄~~印尼为我觉得它太酸了,我有一个幸福的家庭~~我妈妈会做好吃的饭菜给我~~我爸爸每天都会和我打篮球~~我的弟弟会弹吉他~~
这是我的第一次面试~~希望3中能给我一次机会~~以后我会认真学习~~谢谢老师


以上是我为升学面试准备的一篇自我介绍~~求大家修改并翻译~~谢谢

My name is XX,15 years old.I come from XX.My favourite subject is P.E,because I like to play basketball and football.I play basketball everyday,maybe you can play with me someday if you are free.Since I like natural feelings,so green is my favourite colour.I love eating potato and fried chicken,but I dislike to eat tomato for it's too sour for me.I have a happy family.My mother can make delicious dishes for me and my father play basketball with me everyday.Besides,my little brother can play guitar.
This is my first time to be interviewed,and I hope your school can give me a chance.I will study hard in the future.Thank you.追问

q请问一下几个词怎么发音啊
natural sour interviewed chanceu future nervous

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第1个回答  2011-08-12
My name is XX, 15 years old this year, from XX ~ ~ I favorite subject is sports ~ ~ because I like playing basketball and football ~ ~ I everyday playing basketball, if has the time you and I can play ~, my favorite color is green, because I like nature to feel ~ I like to eat potatoes and Fried chicken ~ but I don't like eating tomatoes ~ ~ Indonesia for I think it is too acid, I have a happy family ~ ~ my mother would be prepared to eat the food to me ~ ~ I dad every day and I play basketball ~ ~ my brother can play the guitar ~ ~
This is my first interview ~ ~ hope 3 can give me a chance ~ ~ I'll study ~ ~ thank the teacher
第2个回答  2011-08-12
I call xx, this 15 ~ ~ from xx my favorite subject is sports ~ ~ because i enjoy playing basketball and football ~ ~ i play basketball every day, if any time you can come with me a ~, my favorite color is green, because i love nature gave me a sense of ~ i like to eat potatoes and fried chicken ~ but i don't like tomatoes ~ ~ indonesia for i think it is too sour, i have a happy family ~ ~ my mother will make delicious dinner i ~ ~ my dad every day and i play basketball ~ ~ i