紧张生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的寒假。根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文

Question

计划。
寒假计划：
1.好好休息，学会放松（relax）
2.读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识
3.陪父母聊天（chat），帮他们做家务
4.参加社会活动，了解社会
5.如果有可能的话，参加社会活动，了解社会……
注意：
1.词数80词左右；
2.文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名；
3.方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：知识 knowledge 社会活动 social activities 社会 society

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Answer 1

Winter vacation is coming,this is my Winter vacation plan.l am plan to have a good rest and learn to relax at home .l am going to read books,because read books is interesting and know more Knowledges.l also want to accompany their parents to chat and help them do chores.Last ,If possible l can Participate in social activities, social understanding.
这篇作文要了我老命，一个一个字打出来的哦！！！追问

好快啊！
我还以为要等到明天呢！

追答

呵呵

追问

第一行第二句，Plan to do sth. ，此时 plan 是 v. 不能与be动词联用的
第三行第一句，Knowledge 泛指知识时，作不可数名词
第三行第二句，Their parents ，应该是 my parents 吧
第四行第一句，If possible 后面加 ，比较好
第四行第二句，Social understanding 与前面不连贯啊！不定时表目的比较好一些。

追答

恩恩 那就改一下，对不起啊，呵呵。。。

Answer 2

My winter holidays plans me studying for my English , I will make great efforts to learn English. Persist in listening to half hours of English every day. I will accomplish the school assignment that the teacher arranges best with the quickest speed. I can not forget to take the body exercise certainly also , I may take the body exercise coming drawing out 30- - 1 hours in time in every day. I play with the once computer coming certainly may draw out one small Duan time , watch one meeting TV or. Certainly need only 1 hour. This it is my winter holidays to plan!追问

第一行第一句，不通啊，什么东东？
第六行第三句，通常只有祈使句才用 ！的
不符合题意啊，要审题的，补充里面有要求的，要看清哦！