英语作文 你有一台电脑想要卖掉范文

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Answer 1

Computer accelerated world careful exchange rate. Nowadays, computer is also popular in Chinese. Now almost every family are covered with a computer, but I have no, this is a dream for a mountainous area child, if I have a computer, the problem that the lessons of all don't worry. As long as a computer, a broadband connection, enter "Baidu" website, ask questions need to use the keyboard to lay, simply click the mouse, in a few seconds, the answer came out. This is like a dictionary, the books should be much faster. Answer on the computer not only accurately, and is comprehensive, enough to solve the proposed problem. If I have a computer, I know that all the news, information. Look in front of the TV before news always feel and boring, now just sitting in front of the computer, click the mouse gently, any place, any news of interest news one one will display on your computer. These are better than the boring tv. If I have a computer, then to meet friends from afar, and distant relatives chat can be nothing difficult. If you want to make friends in the network, then enter the network chat, talk with people and their own interest. If you want to keep the contact with distant relatives, you can send an email to relatives on the computer. Distant relatives in the instant received your e-mail. This is like the postman trek more faster. The advantage of the computer too much! If I re

Answer 2

1、 Firstly, you should clearly know what you are going to write and the focus on you topic and then make an outline. 

首先，你应该清楚的知道你要写什么然后专注于你的主题并列出提纲。

2、Secondly, pay attention to the spelling and grammar.  They are not very difficult, but make many  students confused,  especially the grammar.  Don’t let  these little problems affect your writing.

其次，注意你的拼写和语法。它们并不难，但是很多同学都会疑惑，特别是语法。不要让这些小问题影响你的写作。

3、Thirdly, use some phrases appropriately and  combine long sentences  with short sentences to make your composition sound better. 

再次，适当运动词组，把短句连成长句使你的文章听起来更好。

4、Finally, ensure the depth of your composition.  Do not make people feel that you express nothing although you write a long length. 

最后，确保你文章的深度，不要让别人感觉你写了很长，但是什么都没表达。

Eg：

Nowadays,there has been a rapid technology growth in both developing and developed countries, so a lot of new communication methods have come out. One popular modern method of communication widely used all over the world is the computer.

Old friends,I have a computer to sell.It's very precious to me,it is convenient and useful, must be the same for you.Maybe you will ask,Is there enough money to go by stages?Good question,of course not.Oh,I forgot to tell you, I can sell it to you at a cheaper price.What about? I just want to sell my computer quickly.No more!

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