写作思路:题材一般选择自己生活息息相关的内容,作为学生建议选择自己学校或者学习生活相关的。目前正直开学季,以这个为方向吧。开头写明白自己难忘的一天的时间,主要是因为什么而难忘;中间写这一天发生的自己印象深刻的事情,这是重点;结尾表达对这天的感想,抒发感情。
双语写作范文参考
An unforgettable day
Today is an unforgettable day. Because today we held the opening ceremony.
At today's opening ceremony, the teacher brought our students to sing a chorus and tune rhythmic exercises together. The students were very happy. In the afternoon, the teacher and the students took out the prepared fruit and bread, ate and talked together, and looked forward to the beauty of the new semester.
I love our class and I will always remember this day.
难忘的一天
今天是个难忘的一天。因为今天我们举行了开学典礼。
在今天的开学典礼上,老师带来我们同学们一起大合唱,一起调律动操,同学们都很开心。到了下午,老师和同学们一起拿出准备好的水果和面包,一边吃一边聊,一起憧憬新学期的美好。
我爱我们的班级,我会永远记住这一天。
写作模板参考
An unforgettable day
Today is an unforgettable day. Because today ..................
At today's opening ceremony....................... In the afternoon, .................
I love our class and I will always remember this day.
难忘的一天
今天是个难忘的一天。因为今天..............
在今天的..............................到了下午..............................(时间线)
..................我会永远记住这一天。
This Sunday, our family home together, I think the seat in the car will be very boring, to get on the car with my father bought me a little duck to play with me, along the way the mountains green trees red flowers, people busy in the fields, the air in the mountains is particularly fresh, refreshing.
After I get home, I put down the little duck, then went out for a bamboo poles hard to split it into two and a half, and with a box in cages placed the little duck, carrying a cage for a ride, walking, I saw a few paper on the ground and a big piece of fabric, I think I can put little duck in the sky?
So I picked up the newspaper and tape, made a paper plane tied to a few large balloons, the duckling installed in the plane, as the balloon of the duckling inside the cheerful quack, I am happy to shout.
We're taking off. We're going up. An unexpected thing happened, paper plane suddenly scattered, ducklings unfortunately fell into the pond, I have not awakened god, a large silver carp swim over a lovely "friend" drowned in fish Oswald, later found a paper plane inspection is what happened?
It turned out that I had not done the skeleton of the plane, and the duckling died. I was sad to cry, my father came to touch my head said; In the future work must be careful and careful not careless oh.
It is getting dark, we are reluctant to part from home, and take a bus to go home tomorrow we have their own 'things, but in my heart has not forgotten my lovely friend little duck.
这个星期天,我们全家人一起回老家,我想座在车上一定会很无聊,要上车的时候缠着爸爸给我买了一只小鸭子陪我玩,一路上山间绿树红花,人们在田野里忙碌着,山里的空气格外新鲜,令人心旷神怡。
到家以后,我放下小鸭子,然后跑出去找了一根竹竿用力的把它劈成两半,又用一个纸盒塞进去,做成笼子把小鸭子放在里面,提着笼子兜风去了,走着走着,我看见地上有几张报纸和很大一块胶布,我想能不能把小鸭子放到天上去呢?
于是我捡起报纸和胶布,做成一个纸飞机绑上几个大气球,把小鸭子装在飞机里,随着气球的升高小鸭子在里面欢快嘎嘎的叫着,我高兴的嚷道。
我们起飞了,就要上天了。令人意想不到的事情发生了,纸飞机突然散掉了,小鸭子不幸的落进池塘里,我还没有醒过神来,一条大鲢鱼游过来一口把我可爱“朋友”葬身鱼鳆了,后来找到纸飞机检查是什么回事?
原来我没有把飞机的骨架做好,害得小鸭子丧命。我伤心的哭了起来,爸爸过来摸着我的头说;以后做事一定认真仔细不能粗心大意哦。
天快黑了,我们依依不舍离开老家,又要坐车回家明天我们还有各自的事情,但在我心里还没有忘记我那可爱的朋友小鸭子。
作文写作注意事项
作文结尾要短促有力,升华中心,最好结尾能让人读后有一种回味悠长的感觉,一般作文的结尾最能开出一个学生的语言水平和思想认识,应有一定深度。
结尾可画龙点睛,发人深思;或总结全文,照应开头;或用精辟的语言,点明中心,深化主旨。
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