短文改错

Question

Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movieabout mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was such poor that she had to send him to a rich manwho had none child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,which is an old lady.He didn't care too much about him, for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness quiet,and on her bed the doctor fonund a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.
Everybody in the theatre was moved.
共十处错误，帮忙看哈，谢啦！！

Answer 1

改正已在括号处标出！总共十处错误！和楼上都不同哦！尤其是第一个不用改！

Last week I went to a movie, which was very (touching). It was a sad movie about (加入a) mother and her son. When the child was a little boy, his mother was (so) poor that she had to send him to a rich man who had (no) child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years (later) he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, (who) (was) an old lady. He didn't care too much about (her), for she could hardly afford the medical care. One evening, the lady died of a serious illness (quietly), and on her bed the doctor found a letter, on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother. He (去掉had) wanted to call her mother, but it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved.

参考资料：原创回答团（第159号团员）

Answer 2

【答案】
【小题1】happen改成happened
【小题2】at后面加the
【小题3】With改成in
【小题4】Student改成students
【小题5】us改成them
【小题6】Surprising改成surprised
【小题7】Boat改成boating
【小题8】去掉were
【小题9】such改成so
【小题10】gladly改成glad
【答案解析】试题分析：
【小题1】happen改成happened，因为这篇文章用的是过去时。
【小题2】at后面加the，考查冠词：特指“电影院的门”，用the。
【小题3】With改成in，用英语,用介词in
【小题4】Student改成students，主语是they，后面的名词是复数
【小题5】us改成them，they的宾格是them
【小题6】Surprising一般修饰物，surprised一般修饰人
【小题7】Boat改成boating，词组：go
boating
【小题8】去掉were，we和exchange是主动关系
【小题9】such改成so，so
that是引导目的状语从句，“为了”
【小题10】gladly改成glad，be动词后面是形容词做表语
考点：考查短文改错
点评：考查考生对全文的理解和在上下文中运用语法的能力和上下文串联的理解力。特别是名词的单复数，形容词副词的变化和固定搭配。

Answer 3

更正在括号处标明，总共十处错误，保证答案准确率！
Dear
John,
You
(said改成say)
in
your
letter
that
you
are
moving
and
feel
(sadly改成sad).
I
can
understand
(what改成how)
you
feel.
While
moving
can
be
difficult,
it
can
also
be
(excited改成exciting).
Before
you
move,
think
about
which
friends
you
want
to
keep
in
touch
(加入with).
You
would
write
to
them
(but改成and)
share
news
about
your
(lives改成life).
Think
of
moving
(like改成as)
an
adventure,
with
new
places
to
explore
and
new
people
to
meet.
(Trying改成Try)
to
be
friendly
to
people
you
meet
and
show
interest
in
what
you
are
doing.
If
you
give
yourself
(去掉a)
time
and
let
people
get
to
know
you,
you
will
soon
be
making
new
friends.
注：百度知道答题无法使用word文档格式，所以无法按照高考格式来修正，不好意思。

Answer 4

更正在括号处注明！总共十处错误！
Today
is
Sunday,
I
didn't
get
up
early
as
(usually改成usual).
In
the
morning
after
I
finished
my
homework,
I
(do改成did)
some
washing.
Then
I
telephoned
one
of
my
(classmate改成classmates)
and
invited
him
to
see
a
film.
(And改成But)
unfortunately,
when
we
got
to
the
cinema
at
3:oo
pm.
we
found
all
the
tickets
had
(加入been)
sold
out.
Then
we
went
back
to
school
and
played
(去掉the)
football.
When
we
were
about
to
go
home,
we
saw
our
English
teacher,
Mr.wang
(coming改成come)
into
the
school
gate.
He
told
us
we
(have改成had)
made
great
progress
in
English
this
term.
He
also
suggested
that
we
should
read
more
and
more
and
(wrote改成write)
more.
We
promised
him
that
we
would
listen
(加入to)
his
advice.

Answer 5

1.trying 改成 try（and为并列连词，read和try应为同一词性）
2.in 改成 by（用心用by heart记住就行）
3.form（打错了，养成） 后加a（一个好习惯，可数）
4.listening改为listen，此处缺谓语
5.去掉with后的the（此处没有特指其余全部）
6.I 后加have（根据上下文,这里指练习后现在的结果,而不是过去的事情,故须在I后加 have以构成现在完成时.）
7.speaking改成spoken（口语应是spoken English）
8.best 后加to（try one's best to do sth尽力做某事，固定搭配）
9.me 改成 myself（express oneself意为表达思想）
10.why 改成 how（这里的表语从句应是学英语的方式,而不是学英语的原因）

注：你是不是哪个地方打错了，应该是有一个是对的呀，请与原文校对。