请问，“君子，先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”，这么翻译对不对？

Question

a man who worried before the others and   joyed after the others is called a gentle man

主要是时态或者语法，对不对？

Answer 1

a man who worried before the others and joyed after the others is called a gentle man ，时态有问题，应该用一般现在时，还有 joy应该换成enjoy；
a man who worries first and enjoys after the others is called a great man.追问

拜您为师，教我英语吧～！感激不尽～！

Answer 2

愚见，定语用一般现在时比较合适，and改为while

Answer 3

经典的东西翻译成英文就变味了

Answer 4

应该对吧？我英文差

Answer 5

在天下人忧虑之前自己先忧虑，在天下人快乐之后才快乐。
是指忧国忧民，为胸怀苍生的博大胸怀。