写作思路：可以介绍一下校园的整体环境，以及校园的各种设施，再描述一下校园的内涵，中心要明确，语句要通顺连贯等等。
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The first time I entered the campus as a freshman, I was deeply attracted by her cultural atmosphere and historical connotation. Fudan is a graceful lady who is accustomed to serenity but meanwhile each action of hers outpours her innermost tern perament.
第一次走进校园，就被她的文化氛围和历史内涵深深吸引。复旦是一位风度翩翩的女士，她习惯于平静，但她的每一个动作都流露出她内心深处的意念。
Apparently it is worth every effort to probe into her world for the sake of both physical and mental enrichment. Her humanistic spirit inspires me to care for everything around, even the most trivial one.
显然，为了充实身心，深入了解她的世界是值得的。她的人文精神激励我去关心身边的一切，即使是最微不足道的。
On the other hand, catching up with the times, Fudan is modern and smart. You see, the many age-old buildings here are actually great libraries and labs. Scientific and technological developrnent is easily smelt in the air,because she never lags behind the world.
另一方面，与时俱进，复旦又现代又聪明。你看，这里许多古老的建筑实际上是很棒的图书馆和实验室。科学技术的发展很容易被忽视，因为她从不落后于世界。
Our university has first-level equipment and the most experienced teachers as well as the best students. My campus activities are rich and colorful.I consider it to be a honor that I've got a chance to study here and I sincerely hope that we can live wonderful lives in our campus!
我们学校拥有一流的设备和最有经验的教师和最好的学生。我的校园活动丰富多彩，能有机会在这里学习是我的荣幸，我衷心希望我们能在校园里过上美好的生活！