“不同单句之间常用连词连接”是什么意思

Question

英语作文评论“不同单句之间常用连词连接”是什么意思
我在文中有一句话“In the next place, perhaps your parents don't consider your friends are able to believe enough, consequently they don't allow you to go out with your friends, however there is a way to invite your parents to go outside with you and your friends.”无论怎么改都会说“不同单句之间常用连词连接”，是为什么？如何改？

Answer 1

你写的句子太冗长了。连词就是and ，or 之类的词。单句之间需要连词相连。如果不想用连词，就用句号把单句分开。
除了将单句用连词连接，你还可以考虑用复合句，比如宾语从句，定语从句。第一句话就可以改为宾语从句。
In the next place, perhaps your parents consider that your friends don't deserve to be trusted.Consequently, they don't allow you to go out with your friends.However,there is a way to invite your parents to go outside with you and your friends.

Answer 2

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