第1个回答 2009-09-11
不得不对楼上的表示佩服，不过我觉得还有有些地方得做些修改。尤其是关于梦的那一段，个人觉得还是不要用过去时的好。
建议楼主把分数给Chrisren，我的翻译只是从他那边改过来的。至于押韵，那更是难题了。
原来不是白就是黑 It comes to me finally that it's either black or white
只不过是天真的以为 Not as naive as I used to believe
（这一句是与上一句连在一起的，用used to be就衔接不上了，naive也有问题，不过我想不到替换的词）
要醉得清醒要无辜的犯罪 Be drunk awake and commit crimes innocently
现实的世界只有灰 There's only darkness in the reality
坚强得太久好疲惫 So long have I been strong, I'm tired
想抱爱的人沉沉的睡 All I want to do is to sleep holding my love in arms
卷来的风暴凶猛里有种美 Ferocious but beautiful is the storm which is assulting me
死了心痛就没感觉 A dead heart can feel no pain
灰色空间我是谁 In the gloomy room I wonder who I am
记不得幸福是什么滋味 No longer memorize what happiness tastes like
无路可退你是谁 With no way backwards I wonder who you are
怎么为我流泪 And why are you crying for me
梦见发着光的草原 There is a luminous grassland in my dreams
一身伤回到很久以前 I go back to the past with wounds all over my body
我选择不恨带着平静走远 With forgiveness I go away peacefully
醒来后夜还是长夜 But the night seems endless after I am awake
紧抱着我流泪Shedding tears while holding me tight
第2个回答 2009-09-11
押了韵的，没有直译
Either white or black
Childishly I always think
Everything we should unconsciously to make
Nothing in reality is to like
Adamancy makes exhaustion
Embrace lover and sleep without intension
Beauty lies in storm’s presentation
Death is the nature without any question
Who am I in grey nothingness
Couldnt memorize feeling of happiness
Who are you without choices
Sobbing for me with sadness
Lighting plain in dreams
Go back to langsyne after hurts
Leave smoothly as hate flies
Nights always remain endless nights
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第3个回答 2009-09-11
The original is not white is black
Be naive to think that only
To be drunk to be innocent of the crime sober
The real world is only gray
Strong for too long a good tired
Xiangbao loved gray sleep
Rolling inside a kind of fierce storms America
Dead, no feeling of heartache
Gray space who I am
Happiness can not remember what it's like
No turning back who you are
How my tears
Dream hair with light grassland
An injured back a long time ago
I choose not to hate with a quiet walk a longer distance
Night after night, or wake up
I clung to tears
第4个回答 2009-09-11
Originally not white is black
Just naive to think that
To awake to the drunk crime is innocent
The real world is grey
Strong too long good exhaustion
Want to love a deep sleep
The storm came rolling in the fierce gutty beauty
Dead heartache can't feel
Gray Spaces who I am
Remember what is happiness
There was no way out who you are
How is my tears
Dreamed of glowing grassland
A back injury long ago
I chose not to hate take calm
After waking up at night or night
Hold on to my tears