every
year
many
people
get
hurt
or
lose
their
lives
in
traffic
accident.
how
can
we
obey
the
traffic
rules?
first,
in
most
of
china,
we
keep
on
the
right
of
the
road.
second,
before
we
cross
the
road,
we
must
stop
and
look
both
ways—look
left,
look
right
and
look
left
again.third,
we
must
don’t
play
on
the
street.
last,
it’s
good
to
help
children
and
old
people
crossthe
road.
2.
in
traffic
accident
，事故很多，用复数形式比较好traffic
accidents
3.
how
can
we
obey
the
traffic
rules?
译为“我们们如何能够遵守交通规则”，上下句联系欠佳，可以换成以下几种形式：
how
can
we
cut
down
(decrease
/avoid
/prevent)
this？
i
think
we
should
obey
the
traffic
rules.
或者that
is
why
we
should
obey
the
traffic
rules.
（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)
that
is
why.......“这就是.....的原因"
或：what
should
we
do
to
avoid
this?
i
think
we
shoud
obey
these
traffic
rules.
4.
we
keep
on
the
right
of
the
road.换成we
should
keep
right
when
walking
along
the
road.
keep
right
靠右
5.
we
must
stop
and
look
both
ways
.
表示看的方向时最好用direction，换成we
must
stop
and
look
both
directions
6.
third,
we
must
don’t
play
on
the
street.
语法错误，换成：third,
we
mustn’t
play
on
the
street.
表示禁止做…
7.
last,
it’s
good
to
help
children
and
old
people
cross
the
road.
英语时间顺序的表达应该是：first，second，then，at
last
/
finally；last换成at
last
或者finally
it’s
good
to
do
sth.
和
help
sb
(to)
do
sth：to可以省略,
这两个句型结构用的好，表达清楚，简洁。
参考例句(文)
1.how
can
we
cut
down
(decrease
/avoid
/prevent)
this？
2.that
is
why
we
should
obey
the
traffic
rules.
（这就是我们为什么要遵守交通规则的原因)
3.what
should
we
do
to
avoid
this?
i
think
we
shoud
obey
these
traffic
rules.
4.we
should
keep
right
when
walking
along
the
road.
5.we
mustn’t
play
on
the
street
温馨提示：答案为网友推荐，仅供参考