我写的一篇自我介绍,请高手帮忙修改!另外有什么好的句子请告诉我!

我们学校组一个英语强化班(非英语专业),让我们写一篇150字的自我介绍作为初试。讲解的好的我会增加分。急用,希望高手指点!在线等。
My name is Xiaoming. I’m come from Ganzhou,Jiangxi. I bear deep emotion about this city because I spend most of my life in this city. I started learning English when I was in grade four of primary school in Guangdong province. I think language is really interesting because when I was in Guangdong, I found that Hong Kong People should spoke English and Cantonse! I only speak Madarin when I was very yonng. During my primary school period,I watched o lot of English speaking programs (certainly, including many cartoons ) from Hong Kong television stations. From then on, I had a great interest in English. I studied English hard at school and got high marks in exams.Sometimes I surf the Internet and download E-books to read,English songs to listen. I like to research the grammer of sentences and practice the spoken English. I hope I can apply my research to practice in the future. Nothing is impossible to a willing mind in my opinion. I will mdke it true someday.
希望能指出我的错误及不足之处。

My name is XiaoMing. I come from Ganzhou of Jiangxi Province. I love this city deeply because I spent most of my life in this city. I started learning English when I was in grade four of a primary school in Guangdong province. I think language learning is really interesting because when I was in Guangdong, I found that People from HongKong,an area not far from my city,should speak both English and Cantonse! I only speak Madarin when I was very young. During my days in the primary school,I watched a lot of English programs (Of course including many cartoons ) through Hong Kong TV chanels. From then on, I became very interested in it.I worked hard in English learning
at school and got high marks in exams.Sometimes I surf the Internet and download E-books to read,English songs to listen. I like to research the grammer of sentences and practice the spoken English. I hope I can apply my research to practice in the future. Nothing is impossible to a willing mind in my opinion. I will make it
true someday.
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第1个回答  2010-05-07
if you hard you will be the best.
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