一篇英语作文,大家看一下有没有语法错误,还有就是有什么地方可以修改的,thank you so much!!
Shanghai
Hello! Welcome to Shanghai.Shanghai is really a beautiful city. It's in the southeast in China. And the weather in Shanghai is awlays fine,so you can visit many places of inerest.
As we all know, Shanghai Orental Pedrl TV Tower is a amazing place.The tower is not only tall,but also nice.
The Bund is one of the symbols of Shanghai.And the best time to visit there is at night.I'm sure that you will love there.
People in Shanghai are friengly and helpful,they awlays smile at you .
In a word,Shanghai is a magic city,and I love Shanghai.