第1个回答 2010-07-03
Good morning,everyone. It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview .I am very glad to be here for this interview.I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today. First let me introduce myself. My name is 11111, I am 24 years old. I come from Beijing. I graduated from the architecture department of Beijing Architectural engineering University in January ,2010.
I'm an editor at 1111111 four years ago. My major work is write architecture book. While I like it,but this work is being quiet or still or inactive. I’m interested in sports and journey.
I think I am an honest and optimistic girl.I can work under great pressure.I can also get on very well with others in the company soon. This is probably, the position your company offers is a great opportunity for me.
I do believe that with my solid educational background and ample working experience, I would be an excellent worker in your company.
I'm looking forward to becoming a part of the Action team.
Thank you.
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good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.i am very glad to be here for your interview.my name is song yonghao,i am 22 years old .i come from luoyang,a very beautiful aicent city.my undergratuade period will be accomplished in changan university in july ,2004;and now,i am trying my best for obtaining a key to tongji university.
generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in. i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. when i was sophomore, i found web design very interesting, so i learned it very hard . to weaver a homepage for myself, i stayed with my pesonel computer for half a month.,and i am the first one in my class who own his homepage. forthermore,i am a person with great perserverence. during the days preparing for the first examination,i insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like.and just owning to this,i could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end.
well ,in my spare time ,i like basketball, tennis and chinese chess. also english is my favorate.i often go to english corner to practise my oral english on every thursday,and write compositions to improve my witten ability .but i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.
ok, that is all,thank you for your attention
MY BACKGROUND
I was born in a small village of Shan Dong Province on April 4th, 1968. When I was young, my family was very poor, so I had to work to earn money to help my parents after class when I was in the middle school.
In 1986 I was admitted by University of International Business and Economics (or: UIBE) to pursue a bachelor degree in Economics. My major is accounting in Department of International Business Management. The undergraduate education gave me a wide range of vision and taught me how to cooperate with others. I developed several professional interests in Accounting, Finance, and International Trade.
The following eight-year working experience offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence. In 1990-1993, I worked as an assistant to funding manager in China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. In 1993-present, I was employed by China Kingdom Import and Export Corporation to be the Manger of Financial and Accounting Division.
I do believe that with my hard early life, solid educational background and ample working experience, I would be an excellent student of you MBA program.
MY PERSONAL ACCOMPLISHMENT:
After graduating from UIBE, I was employed as the assistant to the funding manager by China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. After reading a lot of related files, and analyzing the overall funding situation of the corporation, I found that the loan policy was not been put into effect. So we have thousands of millions RMB loan with very high interest rate while a large amount of cash in bank with very low interest rate was idle. I reported this to my supervisor, and then we studied and revised the loan policy. This revision saved the corporation approximately RMB thirty millions yuan. In order to raise the funding effectiveness, after one year’s hard work, I developed the internal banking system within the corporation based on the actual funding supply and need of the different divisions and projects. This internal banking system made full use of the corporation’ funding resources, and due to this, I was highly praised by the president of the corporation.
WHY CHOOSE YOUR MBA PROGRAM?
After I have worked in business area for eight years, I feel that I need to continue my education by pursuing a Master degree in business administration. I have practiced my professional expertise in accounting, demonstrated my leadership abilities and perfected my communication skills. But I have yet to become an entrepreneur in my own right, and to fully master the art of modern business. I want to be trained more vigorously in scientific methods of analysis and synthesis. There are a lot of opportunities and challenges in China that I do not yet fell fully confident to seize. My business career has so far benefited mostly the companies that I worked for, but a good business education in your university will probably become a new era for me.
Your university is well known for its excellence in China’s business education. I am sure that, with my extensive business experience, I can be a worthy student of yours. I am anxious to benefit from your seasoned guidance and take advantage of your research facilities.
第2个回答 2010-07-03
Good morning. I am glad to be here to make a brief introduction of myself. My name is 11111, I am 24 years old. I come from Beijing. I graduated from the architecture department of Beijing Architectural engineering University in January ,2010.
I was an editor at 1111111 four years ago. My major work is to write architecture books. I like this job,but I feel that I should do something different,so I quit it.
I’m interested in sports and journey.
I am honest and optimistic, I can work under great pressure.
The position you offers is a great opportunity to me. I look forward to joining the Action team. I hope you can trust me and give me a chance. I won't let you down.
Thank you.