( Jim过去成绩好，并且积极参加学校的各项活动，是一名优秀的三好学生。但是他现今留恋网络游戏，对学习已经失去了兴趣。上课不专心，不按时交 作业，眼看他如此不能自拔，我真的很担心他。 如今网络的繁荣带给了人们很多好处，同时也给人们带来了很多弊端。 虽说玩游戏对青少年来说，有对开发大脑很有帮助，在课后，工作后也能给人带来乐趣，还能片刻的放松。但是沉迷于它不但会占用大部分的学习时间，还会对身体的健康带来不好影响。) 译： Jim the result was good in the past, and participated in the school positively each activity, was outstanding three good students. But he nowadays is reluctant to part with the network game, to studied had already lost the interest. Attends class not with single-hearted devotion, hands over the work not on time, he so is inescapably involved shortly, I really worries him very much. Now network prosperous has taken to the people many advantage, simultaneously has also brought many malpractices to the people. Although played the game to the young people, had to develops the cerebrum to have the help very much, after the class, after the work, could also bring the pleasure to the human, but could also the moment relaxation. Not only but will wallow in it will take the majority of study time, will also bring to body's health affects not well.
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