第1个回答 2009-04-13
I will keep waiting
You say you cannot love now
Then I will wait
Till the day you graduate from the senior high school
Till the day you you can
My heart will be kept for you for three years
During the period
I won't give it to any other girls
I will keep waiting for your return
It seems
We are not able to keep this
Then time can test
Even if you say you don't love me three years later
You are deep in my heart forever
To my love—Hui
第2个回答 2009-04-13
wait........... now you tell me love you cant
well, I can wait
till the day you graduate
till the day you can love me
sleep for three years my heart
during which
I wont tell any girl I love her
long ror your back
maybe
now I cant say it forever
its time who test it
I dont dare three years after love me you dont
in my heart is your shadow
Always loving you! Hui.
你要的是有诗意的吧,押韵的给你，希望能够帮到你。
第3个回答 2009-04-14
Wait ..
Now you say you can not love
Well I can wait
You wait until the day he graduated from high school
You can wait until the day of love
My heart for your three-year slumber
In this three years
I am not going to a girl of any emotion
Waiting for your return
May
Now we can not afford this commitment
To allow time to test it all
Three years later even if you say you do not love me
The bottom of my heart I will always have your shadow
Love you! Hui
等待..
你说你现在不可以谈恋爱
好吧 我可以等
等到你高中毕业的那一天
等到你可以谈恋爱的那一天
我的心为你沉睡三年
在这三年里
我绝对不会对任何一个女孩动情
等待你的归来
也许
现在我们无法承担这个承诺
那就让时间去检验一切
哪怕三年后你说你不爱我
我心底永远有你的影子
爱你！ 慧
第4个回答 2009-04-15
我彻底受不了了。。。。。。。
为什么大家都把情书翻译的这么直白？。。。
敢翻译得美一点么？这里只有中学生么。。。
等待：
I will wait for you.
你说你现在不可以谈恋爱
A relationship is not you are chasing for now, you said.
好吧 我可以等
But till the day when your heart is open, I'll wait.
我先不翻了。。答案太多，怕楼主眼花，要是对这种翻译风格感兴趣的话，留个言我继续翻。
第5个回答 2009-04-15
Waiting...
Said you couldn't be loving.
等待..
你说你现在不可以谈恋爱
But Girl,
I can wait,
till the day you could and graduate.
好吧 我可以等
等到你高中毕业的那一天
等到你可以谈恋爱的那一天
No girls will capture my heart,
sleeping 3 years for your calling back.
我的心为你沉睡三年
在这三年里
我绝对不会对任何一个女孩动情
等待你的归来
Maybe we just saying the words,
some couldn't be shouldered by us.
也许
现在我们无法承担这个承诺
Time will be the witness,
that your shadow is carved deeply in my mind,
even if you were saying you aren't.
也许
现在我们无法承担这个承诺
那就让时间去检验一切
哪怕三年后你说你不爱我
我心底永远有你的影子
Love you!
Hui
PS:说实话，用英文和用中文完全是两码事情。照本宣科的翻译
是绝对无法体现这中间的情感。
因为语言水平有限，我这个仅供作为一个参考，希望对你又帮助。