I HAVE BEEN PLAYED THE FLUTE FOR FOUR YEARS

Question

英语短文改错。一共九处错误。谢谢。I have been played the flute for four years.i am not sure what made me do so, maybe because my dad and his musical talent.When my dad was a little boy ,he was pushed by my grandparents to play piano.He was really a good player after eight years of practice.And now,he pushes my brother and myself to play some instruments.The flute needs a lot of practice.When i fail play a piece well,i feel very excited.Even though my mind is controlling my finger, i feel that i am listening to other person playing in a different room.i realize that i love music.i will keep playing the flute through good or bad times.

Answer 1

I have been to played the flute for four years.I am not sure what me made do so, maybe is because my dad and his musical talent.When my dad was a little boy ,he was pushed with my grandparents ，to play the piano.He was really a good player before eight years of practice.And now,he pushes my brother and myself to play some instruments.The flute needs a lot of practice.When i play a piece well,i feel very excited.Even though my mind is controlling my finger, i feel that i am listening to other person playing in a different room.i realize that is i love music.i will keep playing the flute through good or bad times.

这是修改后的，你自己对照吧

Answer 2

错误只有9处吗？整个短文都很垃圾，怎么改也不会改好，不如重写。

第一句：I have been played the flute for four years 就已经有问题。正确的说法是 I have played the flute for four years。