急需一份英文的个人陈述,在线等

我要申请的是一个国际学院的大学,要一片全英文的个人陈述。我写中文,请帮我翻成英文,可加分,要人工翻译的,可以有少量语法错误尽量不要有太多的专业词汇。

非常感谢老师在百忙之中抽出时间阅读我的个人陈述,但我相信我是值得的。
我的名字是xxx,我即将从xxx学校毕业。从有关报道上看到了这个学校的介绍,让我感到非常欣喜,因为贵校不仅有相当好的名声,更因为,贵校能使我达成我的梦想。全英文的授课方式能帮助我提高自己的英语能力,出国留学让我能更好的磨练自己,贵校的专业更是我所喜爱的,尤其是会展管理和商务方面的专业。
当我还是个孩子的时候,我就有较强的管理天赋,我也很喜欢会展方面的一些工作,(就像我经常出黑板报并获得大家喜爱,布置房间开派对使派对很有气氛等等)可以说,这是我从小以来的理想,另外,通过一些专业的心理测试,我的性格也相当适合这一行业。因此我想申请关于会展管理方向的专业或者商务方向的专业。如果我能够加入这个学校,我会学好专业知识,以及更努力的完善我的英语学习,并运用到实际。我会用我的实际来证明我的努力,我会朝着我的理想前进。
我明天要交了……来不及了,你帮我翻译下巴
拜托了

写作思路:根据题目要求,以个人陈述作为主题,可以从学术背景、研究工作、博士生毕业后的就业目标三个方面来进行陈述,正文:

Academic background

一、学术背景

 I am a junior majoring in computer science and technology in xxxxxx College of Computer Science and Technology. For academics, they have paid a lot and gained a lot in the past three years.

我是xxxxxx级计算机科学与技术学院计算机科学与技术专业的大三学生。对于学术,三年来付出了很多也收获了很多。

On the whole, the weighted average of 92.77,322 main courses in the first five semesters is the first, with over 96 points in mathematics and over 85 points in English. They have been awarded national scholarships for two consecutive years and are outstanding students. Won the Wang Xianghao Scholarship of Jilin University.

整体来说,所有前五学期主干课程,加权平均92.77,322人第一,数学96分以上,英语85分以上,连续两年国家奖学金,校优秀学生。获得吉林大学王湘浩奖学金。

Excellent mastery of professional knowledge in all aspects, comprehensive understanding and high professional quality. Good programming ability, and excellent experimental courses. Understand the problem thoroughly, think carefully and carefully.

对于各方面专业知识掌握优异,了解全面,专业素养高。编程能力良好,实验课基本优秀。问题理解全面透彻,思维细腻认真谨慎。

Second, the research work

二、研究工作

Participated in innovative experimental projects for college students, national projects, and is still under study. Dynamic topology management of online workflow job based on ZooKeeper. The main research work is how to keep the topology of task processing optimal or close to optimal in the dynamic process of tasks

参加过大学生创新实验项目,国家级项目,仍在研。基于ZooKeeper的在线工作流作业动态拓扑管理。主要研究工作是在任务动态过程中,如何使任务处理的拓扑结构保持最优或者接近最优。

Through participating in the experimental project, we have a preliminary understanding of the scientific research process. Understanding of background information, putting forward innovative problems, inquiring relevant information and professional knowledge, thinking about problem solutions, creating solution models for verification with solutions, verifying the correctness of solutions theoretically, and forming final papers for publication. It strengthens the scientific research accomplishment and lays a foundation for future scientific research.

通过参加实验项目,初步了解了科研流程。背景资料的了解,创新问题的提出,查询相关资料、专业知识,思考问题解法,用解法创造解法模型验证,理论验证解法正确性,形成最终论文发表。加强了科学研究素养,为以后做科研工作奠定了基础。

Third, the employment goals of doctoral students after graduation

三、博士生毕业后的就业目标

After my Ph.D. graduation, I hope I can continue my computer research career. Through my undergraduate study, I love computer research and innovation more, and have a strong desire and endless sense of accomplishment.

博士毕业后,希望可以继续计算机科研事业,通过本科的学习,更加热爱计算机方面的研究创新,有一种强烈的愿望和无尽的成就感。

You can not only stay in school to teach and educate people, study and explore, but also enter the research institutions of enterprises in related countries, engage in research and development in related fields, give full play to your knowledge and expertise, and make your due contribution to the society and the country, which deserves the training of the country, society and schools.

既可以留校教书育人,研究探索,也可以进入相关国家企业的研究机构,从事相关方面的研发,充分发挥自己的学识与特长,为社会,为国家做出自己应有的贡献,不愧对国家,社会,学校的培养。

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第1个回答  推荐于2017-11-27
Thank you very much for taking the time to read my statement. But I believe it's worthwhile for me.

My name is xxx and will be graduating soon. I learned about your college from the newspaper. I'm overjoyed because your college not only is a famous one, it's also my dream college. All the classes are given in English, which will help me improve my English skills. And studying abroad can also temper myself. The majors you offer are among my favorites, especially Exhibit Management and Commercial majors.

When I was very little, I started to demonstrate a gift in management. I also love working in the Exhibit Management field. It's like I used to work for the school wallpaper and my work was always acclaimed by everyone. I have decorated lots of parties and they all helped the hosts' success. It's safe to say it's my dream since I was a little boy (girl). In addition, through some professional psychological tests, I have proved to be a good candidate for this industry. So I'd like to apply for a major in the direction of Exhibit Management or Commerce. If I'm admitted to your college, I am sure I will master all it takes, getting the cutting edge knowledge and skills in this area and in the mean time I will also improve my English. I will prove this through my actions. I will show you through my efforts and I am confident I will reach my goal and land my dream job with my study in your college.

后面根据你的意思稍做了一些修改,应该可以发出去了。

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第2个回答  2009-04-20
Please accept my appreciation for your precious time spent on reading this introduction about myself, though I believe that I am worthwhile for it.

My name is XXX and I am schaduled to graduate from xxx soon. I learned about your school through relevant media introduction and think it is fantastic, for your school's major reputation, and further more for my confidence in achieving my dream in your school. Attending total-in-English classes provided by your school would significantly increase my English level, plus the chanllenging coming with international experience, and on top of all these, the majors offered by your school falls right into my field of interest, especially majors in exhibition management and business.

My talents in management started to unveil since my childhood, and I really enjoyed my role in exhibition activities.(such as people enjoyed reading posters conducted by me, or arranging room decorations to make it better ready for parties.) I would like to say that, I had a dream to be in this field since I was a kid and I believe that I was born for it, the professional psychology tests I participated also indicated the same result. Therefore, I would like to applicate to become a student of your school's exibition management or business major. In the fortunate event that I am qualified, I shall give it my best to enhance myself with professional knowledge, and complete the circle in my English learning, and furthermore to apply all these into daily life. I will proof my effort through actions and move forward to my career goal.

祝你好运。
第3个回答  2009-04-20
Teacher: thank you very much for taking the time to read my personal statement, but I believe I was worth it.
My name is XXX. I will graduate from XXX school. The reports from the school, let me feel very happy, because your not only a good reputation, more because I can make a university, my dream. The English teaching methods can help me to improve their English abilities, studying abroad can let me better hone their, your professional is my delight, especially the exhibition management and business.
When I was a child, I have strong management talent, I also like the exhibition of some work, (like I always HeiBanBao out and get everyone loves, decorate a room to party a party atmosphere, etc.), this is the ideal since my childhood, in addition, through some professional psychological tests, my personality is also suitable for the industry. So I want to apply for the professional direction of management on exhibition of professional or business direction. If I can join the school, I will learn professional knowledge, and more efforts to improve my English learning, and applied to practice. I'll use my actual to prove my efforts towards my dream, I will.
第4个回答  2009-04-20
good luck