求助高手 英语语法修改~~急急急！！

Question

My dormitory a total of four friends ,Everyone from different places ,Every morning get up together ,At noon in the dormitory rest ,Night at the dormitory Internet and learning ,Every day are very happy ,Let me have the feeling of home
就是修改一下语法，最好在润润色，但不要太难了

Answer 1

There are four friends in my dormitory,Everyone comes from different places ,Every morning we get up together ,At noon in the dormitory we rest ,Night at the dormitory we are Internet-surfing and learning ,Every day we are very happy ,Let me have the feeling at home

Answer 2

汉式英语 没有谓语不行啊
there are 4 friends in my dormitory, everyone of us comes from different place. we get up together in every morning, and rest together at noon, in the night we play the computer and read the books, I think everyday is happy for us and we all have the feeling at home.