3篇英语文章,希望帮忙改正类似语法,句子不通顺,使用不当之类的错误。

Saving the world
Hello every one, my speech topic is “Saving the world”.
As you know, our world is changing all the time. The weather is worse, the temperature is rising, the plants are less, the ice sheets are melting, many bodies of water are polluting and so on.
Of course, people have discovered many problems and trying to save the world. People used to drive the car to work. Because the world is becoming warmer. People are trying to go to the work by bus, ride a bike or on foot now.
We can also do many things to save the world although we are only the students. As we can see, China has the biggest population in the world. But China has less than many countries’ plants. What can we do? We can grow the plants and we can economy the paper.
However, it is never too early to save the world. East, west, home is best. In fact, we can’t leave the world so we must keep the world from becoming worse. I hope our world can be clean and healthy once again.

My dream job
Hello every one, my speech topic is “My dream job”.
When I grow up, I’m going to be a doctor-a most successful doctor, a real doctor. I think doctor is a greatest and glorious job. I admire doctors. Doctors are very important although many people don’t like them. But, as we can see, we can’t lose doctors or hospitals when we are sick.
But how am I going to be a doctor? First, I am going to study hard in the middle school and study biology batter. If I studied biology very good, I would study medicine easier. Then, I am going to be a student at a medical college. I’m going to work harder in the school.
It’s very difficult to be a good doctor. But I believe I can do it. I hope I can help many sick people, I can save many people. I can be a special and important one. I believe-yes I can!

An unforgettable weekend
Hello every one, my speech topic is “An unforgettable weekend”.
I had a really bad weekend last week.
Last Saturday, the same as usual, I got up at 9 o’clock. I went to kitchen and wanted to eat breakfast. But my father forces me to do exercise before I eat breakfast. “You must do exercise first, it can keep your health.” My father said.
I was running and running. After I ran half an hour and skipped 500 times. I was very tired and hungry. I got home at 10 o’clock. I walked right through the gate and went to the kitchen. I looked around kitchen, but I found nothing. I asked my father:“Dad, have you seen my breakfast?”“Well, no. I think your mother’s cat ate it. ” My father said. “What? Are you joking?!” Finally I made breakfast by myself. I ate my breakfast at 11 o’clock, maybe it is called lunch.
What a bad weekend although it’s unforgettable, isn’t it?
我比较急,希望可以尽快~好的话分数可以再加~万分感谢

Saving the world
Hello every one, my speech topic is “Saving the world”.
As you know, our world is changing all the time. The weather is GETTING worse, the temperature is rising, the plant SPECIES are DECREASING, the ice COVERS are melting, AND many bodies of water are TURNING pollutED.
Of course, people have IDENTIFIED many problems and HAVE BEEN trying to save the world. People used to drive the car to work. Because the world is becoming warmer, People are trying to go to work by bus AND bike or EVEN on foot now.
We can also do many things to save the world although we are only students. As we can see, China has the LARGEST population in the world. But China has FEWER TREES than THE WORLD AVERAGE. What can we do? We can PLANT MORE TREES and we can SAVE the paper.
However, it is never too LATE to save the world. East, west, home is best. In fact, we can’t leave the world so we must keep the world from TURNING worse. I hope our world can be clean and healthy once again.

My dream job
Hello every one, my speech topic is “My dream job”.
When I grow up, I’m going to be a doctor-a most successful doctor, a real doctor. I think doctor is THE greatest and MOST glorious job. I admire doctors. Doctors are very important although many people don’t like them. But, as we can see, we can’t DO WITHOUT doctors or hospitals when we are sick.
But how am I going to be a doctor? First, I am going to study hard in the middle school and study biology REALLY WELL. If I STUDY biology very WELL, I would FIND medicine easier TO STUDY IN THE FUTURE. Then, I am going to be a student at a medical college. I’m going to work harder in the school.
It’s very difficult to be a good doctor. But I believe I can do it. I hope I can help many sick people, I can save many people. I can be special and important. I believe IT -yes I can!

An unforgettable weekend
Hello every one, my speech topic is “An unforgettable weekend”.
I had a really bad weekend last week.
Last Saturday, JUST as usual, I got up at 9 o’clock IN THE MORNING. I went to THE kitchen and wanted to eat breakfast. But my father forceD me to do exercise before I COULD eat breakfast. “You must do exercise first, it can keep you healthY.” My father said.
I KEPT running and running. After I ran FOR half an hour and skipped THE ROPE?? 500 times, I was very tired and hungry. I got BACK home at 10 o’clock. I walked right through the gate and went STRAIGHT INto the kitchen. I looked around THE kitchen, but I found nothing. I asked my father:“Dad, have you seen my breakfast?”“Well, no. BUT I think your mother’s cat ate it,” My father said. “What? Are you joking?!” Finally I made breakfast myself. I ate my breakfast at 11 o’clock, maybe it SHOULD BE called lunch.
What a bad weekend, BUT it’s unforgettable, isn’t it?
给你基本上改了一遍,不能改好,但可以改正确,基本没有语法错误,逻辑上也比较通顺了。除了新增加的都用大写标出来,一些多余或者需要删掉的就无法显示了,你可以和原来的对照比较,也可以直接照我的现在版本采用就好了。你语言基础还行,继续努力呀。
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第1个回答  2011-01-16
Saving the World
Hello,every one!My speech topic is “Saving the World”.
As we know, our world is in danger.The weather is getting worse and worse.The temperature is rising.The plants are becoming less and less.The ice sheets are melting.Many water bodies are being polluted and so on.
To our delight,people have realized these problems and are trying to save the world. They used to drive to work. But now they don't.They go to work by bus, by bike or on foot now.
We can also do many things to save the world although we are only students. As we can see, China has the biggest population in the world. But China has less plants than many countries.What can we do? We can grow plants and reuse paper.
However, it is never too early to save the world. East, west, home is best. In fact, we can’t leave the world so we must keep the world from becoming worse. I hope our world can be clean and healthy again.

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第2个回答  2011-01-16
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doday--today 这是写错了吧

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and I am angry..

the gossip-- a gossiping

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