第1个回答 2010-12-22
I wrote a letter to Jim last Sunday to ask for some advice.(advice不可数)
on how to be a good teacher. Soon I accepted his letter "To be a good teacher"
Jim said in his letter "you must be able to hold the attention and keep interest of your students"
Beside,a good teacher should do whatever he can,for example,what he is teaching should be made clear . Watching a good teacher‘s way,and you will see that he does not sit still before his class. However,a good teacher may not be able to act well on the stage because there are many differences between the teacher's work and the ac-tor.本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答 2010-12-22
第一行把on去掉,星期几前面有last/this/next等修饰词不用再加介词
(advice可以作可数名词,加s没有错)
第二行把accepted改成received,前者是接受,后者才是收到
第三行在able前面加be,must是情态动词,后面跟动词用原形,able是形容词,前面要有be动词,可以把be able to记成一个词组
第四行在can和act中间加to,do what he can的意思是尽他所能
第五行把their改成his
第六行把acting改成act,be able to后跟动词原形
最后一行把actor改成actor's,意思是老师的工作和演员的工作之间还是有很大的不同之处。
(actor中间的连字符应该是书上换行用的,打在一行上就不用可以去掉了)
你好小啊,好好学英语吧。加油!
第3个回答 2010-12-22
你这是作文?还是改错题?
some advices about the methods of being a good teacher.
advices 后面接about
you must be able to .. be able to do sth. 有能力做某事
what he can act what he is teaching to make its meaning clear ??
这句话你的表达上有很大的错误哦
a good teacher should have the ability to show her meaning by her words and actions.
watch a good teacher 这样也是不对的 watch 用于 watch tv 看着一个好的老师?你是想要这样表达? 其实英语里写作文时候不用完全按照中文翻译过来,要灵活点。
also, a good teacher who will never sitting in the classroom for a long time,she would walk around to make sure all the students are listening to her.
for there are very important differences between the teacher's work and the ac-tor. ?? 表述上一样有误哦
第4个回答 2010-12-22
advices去掉S must be able 目前就看到这两个,抱歉
第5个回答 2010-12-25
第一行:删去last Sunday 前面的on,last Sunday 前面。不需要用介词advice是不可数的,因此把advices改成advice。第二行:把accepted改成received。accepted表示接受,received才是收到。第三行:hold 单独用没有坚持的意思,应改为hold on,interest 常与介词ind搭配,不是of.第四行watch前面缺少主语,把watch改成watching,并删掉and,因为watch和后面的see拥有相同的主语,在一句话中只能有一个动词,所以ing形式使得watch这个动作成为see的一个伴随状态或者先后关系,强调see这个动作。还有would改成will,,因为上下文的时态为一般现在时,而would是wil的过去式,因此与上下文矛盾。第五行acting 改成act。be able to do something 是固定短语。for改为because,for没有连接两个句子的功能