高三作文 求改 Hi,I have a book The book named ''Chinese

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高三作文 求改 Hi,I have a book The book named ''Chinese food "I bought it three years ago ,but it looks still new .It instruces many Chinese food .For example dumplings noodles and soup.Covers the food culture from different areas .This book will hold interset for you
I want to exchang the book for a CD about the west popular music .I have no require except for its quilty ,Iwant a clear souds .
I want appreciate it if you can exchange with me .My email is [email protected] ,and you are interested please let me know .求改作文

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细节性修改很多，包括常用词的词性转换后的用法，不一一详述。

Hi, everyone!

I have a book titled ''Chinese Food ". I got it three years ago, but it is still like new. In the book you can see many beautiful pictures of Chinese foods. All kindsof dumplings, noodles and soup are so vivid that one can’t help tasting them. Once you get it, it will interest you in Chinese cuisine.
But now I want to exchange the book for a CD about the west popular music. The only requirement is that the CD should be of high quality and the sound effect excellent.

My email address is [email protected]. Remember to e-mail me if you want the book.追问

请问以后还能帮我改作文吗

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