英语作文:jim沉溺于上网，他想放弃却不知道该怎么做，他写信给你询问你的意见，请回一封你的建议信

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Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I have received your letter last week and give you some advice to reply.
First,we have so many things to do except surf the Internet,maybe I think to form the habit of do much outdoor activities.It is good for your health.
Second,thinking about what importance of your study and spend more time to pay attention to it,I believe you will get a better grade in the final exam.
Third, look for one who be able to supervise you.If someone can warn you in every time,maybe there is Yield twice the result with half the effort.
Well,that's all.
Looking forward your reply.
亲爱的吉姆，
我上个星期收到了你的来信，现在给你一些建议
首先，除了上网，我们还有很多事情要做，我想你可以培养多做户外运动的习惯，这利于你的身体健康
其次，想想你学习的重要性，在学习上多花时间和注意力，我相信你会取得更好的期末成绩
第三，找一个可以监督你的朋友。如果一个人可以经常提醒你,我相信会事半功倍
好了，就是这些
期待你的回复。

Answer 2

先写成中文的，然后翻译成英文，相信你会的