英语短文改错

Question

TheteacherIlovedhermostwas
myEnglishteacher inmy seniorhigh school. Shewas one of thosestrictteacher but shewas verypatiently with us and cared abouteach one of us.Thus we guys allrespected forher.She told usmany stories aboutEnglish
history and spend a lot of timeteach us literature and how towrite.She always writes helpfulcomments and suggestions forwriting,organizing and presentedbetter work.She inspired us toread and write for pleasure,thatgave us confidence.She alwaysmade us to feel happy inher class.She made big difference to ourlives.That's whyI teach now

Answer 1

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总共有十一处错误，有一处肯定是楼主打字有误所致。

The teacher I loved (去掉her) most was my English teacher in my senior high school. She was one of those strict (teacher改成teachers) but she was very (patiently改成patient) with us and cared about each one of us.Thus we guys all respected (去掉for) her. She told us many stories about English history and (spend改成spent) a lot of time (teach改成teaching) us literature and how to write. She always (writes改成wrote) helpful comments and suggestions for writing, organizing and (presented改成presenting) better work. She inspired us to read and write for pleasure, (that改成which) gave us confidence. She always made us (去掉to) feel happy in her class. She made (加入a) big difference to our lives.That's why I teach now.

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Answer 2

The teacher I loved most was my English teacher in my senior high school. She was one of those strict teachers but she was very patient with us and cared about each of us.Thus we guys all respected her.She told us many stories about English history and spent a lot of time teaching us literature and how to write.She always wrote helpful comments and suggestions for writing,organizing and presenting better work.She inspired us to read and write for pleasure,which gave us confidence.She always made us happy in her class.She made a big difference to ourlives.That's why I teach now
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