首先,"平面设计"专业是"Graphic Design"而不是"plane-design".按照你的原话翻译的话,在英语里会比较奇怪,所以我调整了一下,还是你想表达的意思:
I am a student coming from China, I really want to take "Bachelor of Graphic Design"(你不是要读本科么,就是要取得学士学位么,一般来讲,你读的项目是与学位一起说的) in your University/College. But my English is not so good, I am just wondering, if I could be able to get admission with out a formal proof of my English level.
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