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我是你学校的新学生,录取通知书上写的是9月十号去学校报道,不过由于奥运会机票紧张,我只能买到十号到美国的票,所以可不可以请假一天,十一号去学校报道

I am a new student in the school.I have been told that I should go to school on 10th,September.because it is difficult to buy a ticket during
the Olympic Game ,I have to go to American on 10tn,September.May I reach school later ?I thing I will reach here on 11th,September.

I hope to reicive your reply.(这句出于礼貌,自己加上去的)
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第1个回答  2008-08-08
I`m a new student of your school , thouge the admission notice is written that to go to school on September 10th , however , because of tension on the Olympics.I can only buy the ticket on the 10th to the US , is it permitted that asking for one day off , getting to school on September 11h .
第2个回答  2008-08-08
I am a new student of your unniversity. I can only buy the airplane ticket on 10,Sep beacuse the tickets have been sold out in olmpic times. So could I be late for only one day and enroll on Sep11th. Thank you
第3个回答  2008-08-10
I'm a new student in your school,I have been told to go to school on 10th September in my admission notice.I olny can buy the tickets on 10th to USA because of the olympic ,so may I ask for one day off,go to school on 11th?