汉译英 , 帮我把这段话翻译成英文。

1、

我想向你靠近

我对你伸出指尖

触到冰冷的屏幕

冰冷的...

提醒我,清醒 !

_________________________

2、

站在人群中

以为下一个擦身而过的人,就会是你

可是,那时的你

正在只属于你的

光鲜夺目的舞台

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请帮我按照我的格式翻译。

语法要正确、

悬赏分给80

谢谢

1、
我想向你靠近 -I would like to assure you and around
我对你伸出指尖 - I extend to your fingertips
触到冰冷的屏幕 -Touch-screen cold
冰冷的... -Cold ...
提醒我,清醒 ! -Reminded me that the sober!
2、
站在人群中 -From the crowd
以为下一个擦身而过的人,就会是你 -Under a passing thought that the people will be your
可是,那时的你 -However, at that time you
正在只属于你的 -Is the only belong to you
光鲜夺目的舞台 -Guangxian dazzling stage
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第1个回答  2008-07-29
1、

I'd like to be close to you

I reached out my finger tip to you

Only cold screen

So cold

Reminded me to keep awake!

_________________________

2、

Standing among people

I though next one who would pass me by, was you

But you, at that time

Just on your own

Shining stage

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第2个回答  2008-07-29
I wanna approach you
With my fingertip
But what I get is a cold screen
As cold as it is...
That remind me of waking up; wake up!
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Standing in the crowd
I thought the next passing person would be you
While, you, at that time
Was on the shining stage
Belonging only to you.
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第二个最后两句与汉语无法对应,所以颠倒了一下,因为belong to是修饰stage的,不得不放后面。

如果再修饰修饰,或许可以弄个ababc什么的,怎奈时间有限……
第3个回答  2008-07-29
1.
I want to draw near toward you
I reach out fingertip to you Touch to ice-cold screen
andIce-cold ... Warn me of , come round!
2.
Stand in crowd
Believe next the people who brushes past ,
being therefore likely is you
In any case , at that time you
Belong to you in course of only Only fresh stage dazzling the eyes
第4个回答  2008-07-29
1.
I would like to assure you and around

I extend to your fingertips

Touch-screen cold

Cold ...

Reminded me that the sober!
2.

From the crowd

Under a passing thought that the people will be your

However, at that time you

Is the only belong to you

Guangxian dazzling stage

参考资料:G.cn

第5个回答  2008-07-29
我不献丑了,本人鸟语也十分十分的垃圾,但本人有个笨办法,楼主去下个金山词霸来自己翻译吧