写作思路：用简单的语法写出一篇文章，描述一个给朋友送礼物的事情。
正文：
My good friend Yu Yiming's birthday is coming soon. I took out my pocket money and bought him his favorite gift - water gun.
我的好朋友余一鸣就快要生日了，我把自己的零花钱那了出来，给他买了个他最喜欢的礼物——水枪。
Yesterday morning, when I was in the supermarket to choose a water gun, my father suggested that I buy school supplies for Yu Yiming. I think my father's idea is not right at all, because what Yu Yiming lacks most is not school supplies.
昨天上午当我在超市挑选水枪时，爸爸却建议我给余一鸣买学习用品，我觉得爸爸的想法一点儿都不对，因为余一鸣现在最缺的不是学习用品。
It's happiness! His parents often quarrel recently. I don't think he is happy at all! Now I want to give him what he lacks most.
而是快乐!他的爸爸妈妈最近经常吵架，我觉得他一点儿都不快乐!我现在就是要送他最缺的东西。
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写作思路：用简单的语法写出一篇文章，描述一个给朋友送礼物的事情。
正文：
My good friend Yu Yiming's birthday is coming soon. I took out my pocket money and bought him his favorite gift - water gun.
我的好朋友余一鸣就快要生日了，我把自己的零花钱那了出来，给他买了个他最喜欢的礼物——水枪。
Yesterday morning, when I was in the supermarket to choose a water gun, my father suggested that I buy school supplies for Yu Yiming. I think my father's idea is not right at all, because what Yu Yiming lacks most is not school supplies.
昨天上午当我在超市挑选水枪时，爸爸却建议我给余一鸣买学习用品，我觉得爸爸的想法一点儿都不对，因为余一鸣现在最缺的不是学习用品。
It's happiness! His parents often quarrel recently. I don't think he is happy at all! Now I want to give him what he lacks most.
而是快乐!他的爸爸妈妈最近经常吵架，我觉得他一点儿都不快乐!我现在就是要送他最缺的东西。
As soon as I finished, my father broke in and said, "it's not fair that you only give me a gift of ten yuan for my birthday, but you give him a gift of thirty yuan for Yu Yiming's birthday."
我刚说完，爸爸就插嘴说：“我过生日的时候你才送我十块钱的礼物，余一鸣过生日你却送他三十块钱的礼物，不公平!”
I explained to my father, "Dad, the socks I gave you are also the one you lack most. How can it be unfair?" my father said, "then I'm not happy now. You can also give me a water gun!"
我给爸爸解释说：“爸爸，我送给你的袜子也是你最缺的，怎么会不公平呢?”爸爸又说：“那我现在就不快乐，你也送我一把水枪吧!”
Looking at my father deliberately pretending to be pathetic, I have been laughing in my heart. Can my father be a famous actor?
看着爸爸故意装得可怜巴巴的样子，我心里一直在偷笑，爸爸是不是可以做一个名牌的演员呢?
On the day of his birthday, when I delivered my carefully selected water gun to him, the smile on his face proved everything.
在他生日的那一天，我把自己精心挑选的水枪送到他的手中时候，他脸上的微笑就证明了一切。
Looking at my friend's happy smile, I also feel very happy.
看着朋友开心的笑容，我也感到很高兴。
本回答被网友采纳And I think over that for a long time before this. Oh yes, doesn't he/she loves to swim? Ok, I will buy a good quality swiming underwear for him/her---he/she must be much more sexy to wear this, oh come on let it attack our eyes, though he/she already has a strong and sexy body! That is a good idea! Just do it! Happy birthday!本回答被网友采纳