关于介词作后置定语的问题,谢谢老师

inporper use of substance ,alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people to feel under pressure,请问不可以把among改成介词短语作后置定语,去掉从句which 变成谓语cause(inporper use of substance ,alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles among other problems cause people to feel under pressure,)谢谢老师

改写后句子没问题,但意思有所改变。

  【原句】inporper use of substance ,alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people to feel under pressure,挥霍浪费、酗酒和不健康的生活方式就在造成人们感到不堪重负的其他一些问题之中。

  【主语】inporper use of substance ,alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles
  【系动词】are
  【表语】among other problems which cause people to feel under pressure (which 从句限定 among 的介词宾语 other problems)

  (挥霍浪费、酗酒和不健康的生活方式是其中的其他问题,这几个问题造成人们感到不堪重负,也就是说造成了人们感到不堪重负的还有别的方面的问题。)

  【改写后】inporper use of substance ,alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles among other problems cause people to feel under pressure,其他问题中的挥霍浪费、酗酒和不健康的生活方式造成人们感到不堪重负。

  【主语】inporper use of substance, alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles among other problems (后置定语 among other problems 限定 inporper use of substance, alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles)
  【谓语动词】cause
  【复合宾语】people to feel under pressure

  (挥霍浪费、酗酒和不健康的生活方式造成了人们感到不堪重负,而这三种东西是包括在其他问题之中的,也就是说只有这三种东西造成了人们感到不堪重负。)来自:求助得到的回答
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