在线等,中译英(字数一般,但求专业)

请有一定英语水平人员帮忙翻译以下内容(有关老师推荐信的):

我认识他是在他上我教的课程:信息安全技术,在2007年,当他还是一个大三的学生时。据我观察,他在这门课程的学习过程中,每次都坐在第一排,非常专注地听我讲课,并在课堂上积极参与讨论,勇于发表自己的观点。同时,他也是我教的这个班上成绩最好的学生(1/70),因此给我留下了深刻的印象。

除了他在课堂上的出色表现,课后他也常常找时间和我探讨相关学术问题。我发现他是一个非常有前途的年轻人,伴随着智慧和创造力,他那对问题科学的思考,独特的见解以及刨根究底不懈追求真理的精神让我感到敬佩。

THANKS.
P.S. 谢谢1楼和3楼的翻译,无论是谁将被选为答案,凡是认真帮助翻译过的人,本人都非常感激! :)

Thanks. According to yours translation.My conclusion are as fellows,is there any problems yet?

I met he in my class "Information Security Technology" in 2007, when he was a junior student in the college. According to my observation, he always sat in the front row, listened to my lecture carefully. In addition, he also involved actively in class discussions and expressed his opinions with full confidence during the course. Furthermore, he was also one of the best students (1/70) I taught in this class, which left a deep impression to me.

Apart from his excellent performance in the classroom, he often tries to discuss some academic issues with me. I found that he was a very promising young man with high intelligence and remarkable creativity. I am also impressed by his scientific way of thinking and his spirit of pursuing the truth consistently.

我认识他是在他上我教的课程:信息安全技术,在2007年,当他还是一个大三的学生时。据我观察,他在这门课程的学习过程中,每次都坐在第一排,非常专注地听我讲课,并在课堂上积极参与讨论,勇于发表自己的观点。同时,他也是我教的这个班上成绩最好的学生(1/70),因此给我留下了深刻的印象。
I came to know him when he was a junior in the university in 2007 and attended "Information Security Technology", the course I was teaching in the university. According to my observation, he always sat in the front row, listened to my lecture carefully, participated actively in class discussions and voiced his opinions courageously in learning this course. Meanwhile, he was also one of the best students (1/70) I taught in this class, which left me a deep impression.

除了他在课堂上的出色表现,课后他也常常找时间和我探讨相关学术问题。我发现他是一个非常有前途的年轻人,伴随着智慧和创造力,他那对问题科学的思考,独特的见解以及刨根究底不懈追求真理的精神让我感到敬佩。
In addition to his excellent performance in the classroom, he often found time to discuss some relevant academic issues with me. I found that he was a very promising young man with wisdom and creativity. I really appreciate his thinking on scientific issues, his unique insight and his relentless exploration and pursuit for truth.
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第1个回答  2008-06-14
这样应该会更好些

我认识他是在他上我教的课程:信息安全技术,在2007年,当他还是一个大三的学生时。据我观察,他在这门课程的学习过程中,每次都坐在第一排,非常专注地听我讲课,并在课堂上积极参与讨论,勇于发表自己的观点。同时,他也是我教的这个班上成绩最好的学生(1/70),因此给我留下了深刻的印象。
I came to know him when he was taking the course I'was teaching,the Information Security Technology, in 2007, when he was still a student of Grade Three in university. According to my observation, he always sat in the first row, and listened carefully to my teaching. He actively joined the discussion in the class and bravely expressed his own oppinions. Meanwhile, his grade was the best in the class of 70 students, so he left me a deep impression.

除了他在课堂上的出色表现,课后他也常常找时间和我探讨相关学术问题。我发现他是一个非常有前途的年轻人,伴随着智慧和创造力,他那对问题科学的思考,独特的见解以及刨根究底不懈追求真理的精神让我感到敬佩。
Besides his excellent performance in the classroom, he often found time to discuss some relevant academic issues with me. I found that he was a very promising young man with wisdom and creativity. I really admire his thought on scientific issues, his unique insight and his spirit of endlessly pursuing the truth.
第2个回答  2008-06-14
I came to know him in 2007 when he was a junior in the university and attended the course "Information Security Technology" I was teaching. From my observation, he always sat in the front row, listened to my lecture attentively, participated in class discussions actively, and voiced his opinions courageously during the whole course. Meanwhile, he was also the best students (1/70) I in this class, which left me a great impression.

In addition to his excellent performance in the classroom, he often found time to discuss some relevant academic issues with me. I have found that he is a very promising young man with intellegence and creativity. I really appreciate his thinking on scientific issues, his unique insight and his relentless exploration and pursuit for truth.

一楼翻得很好。我稍微改动了一点,不知对否。分数请给一楼。
第3个回答  2008-06-16
我个人的翻译。只是觉得你这份推荐信不像是你老师写的,倒是有点像你冒充你老师为你自己写的。
I got to know him in 2007, when he was taking my course, Information Security Technology, as a senior, and he made deep impressions on me. Every time he attended my class, he always took a seat in the first row, listening attentively, participating in discussions actively, and voicing his own viewpoints courageously. He was also the best one of the 70 students in the class I taught.
Besides his remarkable performance in class, out of class he often spared time to consult with me as to some academic problems. I found he was a promising young man with wisdom and creativity, and I appreciated and admired him for his scientific contemplation, unique interpretation, and everlasting exploration for truth.
第4个回答  2008-06-14
I got to know him in 2007, just a junior, when he was taking my course, Information Security Technology. According to my observation, he always sat in the front row, listened to my lecture attentively, participated in class discussions actively, and voiced his opinions courageously during the whole course. Meanwhile, he was also the best student in this class(1/70) , which left me a great impression.

In addition to his excellent performance in class, he often found time to discuss some relevant academic issues with me. I have found that he is a very promising young man with intellegence and creativity. I really appreciate his thinking on scientific issues, his unique insight and his relentless exploration and pursuit for truth.
基本上没怎么改,一楼的不错了,给一楼分吧